this is really random. confusing-random.

Who the God-damn ** hell (yeah I curse a lot. What do you expect? I'm Psycho) is M. Night Shylaman

(Imitating Tallest Purple's voice) Hey! I like H.G. Wells! But it's a really great fic, and I can't wait to read chapter five. Here I go.

Hey, what do you know? I'm studying to be a paranormal investigator too! Probably the main reason that I began watching Invader Zim, you know, with the alien in it that happens to be named Zim? Yes, I know we all know him. Great story. I love it.

WWHHHHHOOOOOOOO!!!PLOT TWISTS!!!!!!!! You get the Spiffy Award for your story's spiffynes! (i love the word spiffy) spiffyspiffyspiffyspiffy!

MoriMori_EYE is standing with his back against a concrete wall in the city at midnight. Abri approaches him, gun drawn. "What'd you think of my 'fic?" MoriMori_EYE looks at her; he's not that intimidating, just a tall guy - a little round in the face - with long brown hair. Sure ain't no bishonen. "It was **." An evil grin spreads across Abri's face, "Oh really? I don't think that was the right thing to say." Abri shoots MoriMori_EYE in the chest and head several times, then shoots him in the crotch for good measure. "**," Abri cooly blows the smoke from her gun's barrel. "That's Mister ** to you." For a split second, a thin web of red light engulfed her, vanishing again before she could blink. A gust of wind blew past her. Abri then fell forward, now a mess of smoking cubes of flesh. "Gotta love those Androids," MoriMori_EYE rubs the spot on his head where Abri shot him, "That was for Zim." ... ... ... ...So yeah, there's my general review of the 'fic. What goes around, comes around, huh? Evil, evil, evil...

Im a paranormal investagator too!Not really,but I do take on cases for friends.Do you really make crop circles?Me and my cousin do,its really fun!But only on our land,we dont want to get arrested!I like the story,keep it up!

ooooooooh spiffy, i like it. but zim died *sobs* WWWWHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYY!?!?!?!?? oh well. M.NIGHT SHYALAMAN MOVIES ROCK!!!!!!! Update soon!

Those three things were begging to be put together. Good job! :-)