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| Reviews for Looking back, Moving Foward |
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   Ravenclaw Slytherin 5/15/13 . chapter 16I like your story! Update soon! |
| luneara eclipse 5/6/13 . chapter 16 Freakin' awesome story! I love how you switched out Bilbo for Marie and added some changes to make her character fit in the story. Marie is very well-written and seems like a fully realized character: she is trying to prove she can keep up in the quest, yet she still has moments where she questions herself on whether or not she made the right choice which I think is great. Keep up the fantastic work! |
| Gigigue 4/26/13 . chapter 16 Other than the swear word, I really liked the chapter. It was very sweet. |
| Gigigue 4/26/13 . chapter 15 That was the best plot twist ever. Man, I feel so bad for Thorin and Kili. |
| Gigigue 4/26/13 . chapter 14 Oh my gosh, awesome! |
| JasmineVsAngels 4/25/13 . chapter 16 Aaahhhh! Love love love it! Can't wait to read the next chapter! :D update ASAP. :) |
| Gigigue 4/24/13 . chapter 13 For some reason, when you said Hidden Valley, I thought of Hidden Valley Ranch dressing. Yup, that's my random brain working. Anyhoo, I see you're developing a love triangle. |
| Gigigue 4/24/13 . chapter 12 And now they leave to go on their real quest. Sweet. |
| Gigigue 4/24/13 . chapter 11 It's Marie/Thorin fluff! Yay! One thing I noticed: it's 'reached' not 'retched'. |
| Pergjithshme 4/22/13 . chapter 16 Well, I have officially caught up. I love it so far. :) |
| Pergjithshme 4/22/13 . chapter 13 Kili has a cruuuush! I think the sort-ot love triangle is adorable, and I love how it's the seasoning to the story, the meat of it being action and plot. So...yeah. Thumbs up. |
| Stormglass 4/21/13 . chapter 16 Please continue I LOVE THIS STORY! |
| Pergjithshme 4/21/13 . chapter 1 OH MY GOSH! THIS IS SO UNBELIEVABLY CUTE I'M ALREADY CRYING. |
| Remus Hroozley 4/21/13 . chapter 16 awesome! another chapter, cant wait for more! Love youuuu! |
| ZabuzasGirl 4/21/13 . chapter 16 Update immediately, please! |
