This is pretty good, but with the grammatical errors fixed, it could be even better.

Heartbreaking! Exactly how I imagine it... my heart goes out to Daemon :( It is going to be a torture to have to wait until August.

This is making me cry all over again. The end of Opal had me bawling my eyes out. I hate bill, biff, barf watever tht idotic, traiters name is. Killing him would be showing him mercy and he doesn't deserve it. What he deserves is something FAR worse! Gosh i hate him with every fiber in my bones. Other than the reminder of my hatred for biff and the sadness at the end of Opal, i really love this. Thanks for doing this. There are so many good Daemon points of views that Armentrout doesn't put in her books!

p.s this wait feels like hell, i just want the next book to come out!lol

Hi. I really love this. I enjoyed it. Can I translated this into spanish? I have friends who want to read it. Thanks.

WOW! this is simply amazing! i love the lux series and im so glad that people are deciding to write fanfiction! :)
this was amazing thou! you are an amazing writer! :)

omg hearing this chapter from his point of few and hearing him say that he loves katy and those last few words, i lost her...

i got a feeling that someone stabbed my in the heart and i made me cry

danm you jennifer, i sure hope that they will be back together soon in the next book or i don't know what i will do

Amazing! I love what you've done so far!

OMFG! YOU HAVE MADE ME CRY! I totally love this fanfiction! is just perfect! poor Daemon!

WHY?WHY?WHY!? WHY DID SHE HAVE TO END THE BOOK LIKE THAT!?

When I was reading this chapter I cried like a baby and screamed through the house. When I read this version I cried all over again lol. Good job!

I love it!
-Alice

Well... I didn't like it...

Amazing job! Please write more!

You did an amazing job! I loved both chapters! Please write more!

Please write more I loved reading this and it's the only other interpretations of what daemon was thinking I could find. Please write the first chapter from his point of view it would be amazing