That. Was. So. Freaking. Adorable! WyattxEmerson ftw! I'm really interested to see who'll move, Emerson or Wyatt... Because unfortunately Wyatt does not seem the type of person to spend the rest of his life in Amity... Next to Jonah *snorts* but it would be interesting to see your take on the Amity initiation! Just don't have them both transfer and be separated again! XD Now that would be a cruel twist of fate!

Keep writing please

Gah. Those two need to get their poop in a group.

I kind of really love Emerson and Wyatt's relationship. It's just so... normal XD
But of course I really can't wait to see how this turns out.
By the way, totally tag teaming the idea of Emerson switching to Dauntless :3
Update soon!

Love it!

I like it. Your a good writer can't wait for more!

This is well done. I've never been much for OC/OC stories, but I surprisingly like this one. The exposition is is interesting and manages not to be too overwhelming or detail heavy. Wyatt seems like an interesting character (possibly divergent?) and I like that you named Emerson after a transcendentalist instead of a flower, pretty awesome. Anyway, I hope you guys continue this one even though I'm the first review. I think it has the potential to be really awesome. Do you intend to add Tris and Four to the story at some point? Anyway, sorry if this review was way too long, I tend to ramble.
Thanks for the awesome story,
Arianna