I would like to see where you go with it. I thought it was very well done.

Great beginnings. You have good material to develop a longer story. I hope you develop a complete fiction from it.

Excellent story. By all means continue it. Hope to see more soon. The Smallville section has a lot of Superman fic if you want to check it out. Keep it all coming!

Thanks,
John

This whole thing was absolutely beautiful. Your imagery was amazing. I felt like I was seeing all of those places myself. And I think you captured Clark's character really well (or what we know of it anyway!) Thanks for sharing!