I just loved this story can't wait to read another one :)

Wow !..Just re-read this chapter ( well re-reading the whole story as I really, really loved it! The last paragraphs where John was telling Roy he was gonna tell on him ? I wanted to smile but you had him hurting so badly.. my heart broke...

I know its been said over and over... and over.. but this is truly a great telling of their friendship.. truly great !

Very well crafted story. You maintain the interest throughout the whole duration and have a very nice prose. I think you we're correct to skip the hospital time, but I am curious to know how you would have handled the rescue. Thank you for a truly enjoyable read.

Awesome story! I was in the mood for a good h/c fic and this hit the spot! :D

Yet another great story :) I was a little sad you didn't give details of the rescue but at the same time this chapter works perfectly. Thanks for sharing!

You are such a fine example of a great writer; you acknowledge your beta gratefully and with pride. Your work shows talent beyond fanfiction though I am grateful you write here. Your fire descriptions are breath taking, especially when you were talking about the resentful embers after the fire was put out. The home owners who foolishly left candles in the wrong places were perfectly written too and the fireman's reaction to the harsh criticism of their victims was dealt with much like in the episodes; with calm, polite answers given in the face of unfair insult. Your take on the crew was masterful, just as when Hank reacted in the episode where the home owners had given the wrong address and caused a delay in response time. You have a great insight into keeping the characters in character too. The story was kept very sharp and well paced and ended with me wanting more which was perfect and I especially appreciated that you clearly had a good idea of when the story would post and end. Cap was a favourite for me in this story which is rare; I loved that he kept to his mandated itinerary but also didn't abandon his men. In this way the story was realistic because as much as fans want the guys to go galloping off to save John and Roy, their orders still come from the head of the department. And in all this, you kept it very clear how much the guys wanted to find their friends. I was riveted by the injuries, so serious and life threatening and with each new chapter happy to find both men still alive. I loved the friendship and compassion and emotion you wrote into John and Roy without putting it over the top; it was just perfect. Thanks so much for taking the time to give us another thrilling story, you never disappoint.

I was so excited when I looked at your profile and saw a new Emergency story. And it was just as great as all your other ones. I liked how you switched from Johnny and Roy to the guys every chapter (kept us from wondering), although I have to admit I would've liked to see a little of gang at Rampart. ;)

Really enjoyed this read but then I do like your writings! Especially liked the last chapter, you really nailed the characters! Thanks

I'm really enjoying your story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Beautifully done! I always enjoy your plotting and execution.

Always love your stories, Yum, you write such gripping tales that keep the reader on the edge of their seat. Great work on this one...dare I hope that you may have some more Emergency! stories for us in the future?

Good read. Really enjoy your stories. Thanks for the fun.

(In a basket covered with a blue cloth you will find 3 dozen freshly baked chocolate chip cookies with one half dipped in milk chocolate.) Mmmmm! That's how much I enjoyed this story. Oh yes, I forgot the milk. Included with your cookies is a large ice cold glass of milk. Enjoy.

Thank you for a wonderful example of their friendship

Okay, this was excellent. Although I did yell, "You blinded Roy!" about four times, scaring my dogs. Love your Hank, especially.