|Reviews for If Secrets Could Kill|
| BraveSirRobin ran away 8/21/02 . chapter 8
this is greaty
| Larzdinn 8/21/02 . chapter 11
I just reviewed Siren's Story, chapter 2. And hey, I actually liked the mushy part (I'm a hopeless romantic, so sue me!)... :) *sigh* Lucky Siren, betrothed to Cori... The part with the elf child giving Joren a picture was interesting, so was Kel's dream - I wonder what that was all about? Don't worry, it's okay that Joren hasn't seen the doctor yet. I mean, you're the author and you now know where you're going with the entire story! *cheers* Oh, and DON'T call your poem "dratted!" It was lovely, absolutely lovely. (I enjoyed the poem, can you tell?) I still write the longest reviews? Really? YAY! *groan* I'm not the first to review this chapter either, more like the fifth. Oh well... as I've taken to saying, there's always next time! Right? Once again, you're always welcome for the reviews. *waggles index finger at Siren* Now, take my advice and go rest! *snorts* Going to bed late, exhausted by writing, what next? Your readers need you healthy, not sick! So relax... I really can't believe I'm saying this, but don't fret if you can't get additional chapters for ISCK and SS out every day... as long as you update, it's good enough :) Now, I have to be going... I hope this review manages to live up to the standard I've set for LOOOOOOONG reviews when it comes to ISCK... *crosses fingers* Well, till next time, arrivederci (umm...I think, or rather, hope that was Italian...)! See, I'm doing my best to learn how to say goodbye in lots of languages - so far, I know English (no duh! lol), Spanish, French, Chinese, Japanese, and possibly Italian... (that's what I tried out with you). I'll try a different one next time... and hopefully, I'll spell it right! (Yes, I know, I'm weird.) All right. I really am saying bye now. Bye. (There!) Peace, love, and blueberry jello, -Edi
| Keita 8/21/02 . chapter 11
YOU'RE glad i gave you a second chance? I'M glad i gave you a seond chance. This is an excellent story!
| randominanities 8/21/02 . chapter 11
Yay! Joren will be in the next chapter more! The mush was okay, I know that it's hard to control your story. I really liked the picture and the dream and how they hint at things to come. The poem and more adventure soon! Yay! (I love that word. Can you tell?)
I hate school! No one ever updates as quickly and the teachers and homework are... evil! It starts six days after my b-day! The injustice!
Joren's going to the doctor, Joren's going to the doctor- okay, I'm just blabbing now.
Your story is so great and you must update it soon! Please? Even though school is really soon?
| Bewildered Muse 8/21/02 . chapter 11
Actually being small can rock, guys really like small girls, makes them protective, which isn't always a bad thing. Good chapter, when they were refusing they sounded like Joren from my fic, lol, poor darlings. Write more soon.
Until next time!
| Angel Of The Storms 8/21/02 . chapter 11
Well good chapter, i like the mushy stuff. It sweet. Awwwwwwwwwww.
Anyway put more Joren in next chapter! And Kel like them both, mind you i like Siren and Cori too... *contiues to mutter until dragged off computer by parents, manages to type one last thing*
| Keita not logged on 8/20/02 . chapter 10
Yay! More! I first started reading this and got mjorly confused. Then I started getting desperate for my guilty pleasure...K/J fics... hehehe
So I gave this story a second chance, and what do ya know? It's good!
| cerillion 8/20/02 . chapter 10
love the plot. keep it up.
| christine 8/20/02 . chapter 10
i can't wait for the next chapter, i love how we get to see into joren's head, and the joke about him hving a heart condition is so funny, i'll be waiting and watching for the next update
| That Girl5 8/19/02 . chapter 10
wooo!great new chappie as always...more "heart trouble" for Joren, eh?...if only he knew...i do enjoy the siren/cori action...almost as much as the k/j action...ALMOST...i'll always love the k/j a little more that everyone else...well, until, next chappie...
| Lovely Little Muse 8/19/02 . chapter 10
Poor, clueless Joren. Heart trouble... yeah, sure! :) :) I LOVE Joren. *grins uncontrollably* Hope to see more of this story soon, I'm gonna read your Cori/Siren story now!
| Larzdinn 8/19/02 . chapter 10
hello! *sigh* I'm not the first to review this chapter either. I saw that this and the first chapter of Siren's Story were up earlier this morning, but I didn't get the chance to read and/or review because I was working. sorry. I'll try to be first next time, but with school starting in a week, there's not much chance of that :) I'll always review, though, even if I'm not first, so don't worry! *smiles* I'm glad you had fun hiking! I'm glad that chapter 9's review was longer than chapter 8's! *cheers* and I'm glad that school won't keep you from updating and your fans! you know, I think you're getting better at the misused words thing too - I didn't really look, but then again I didn't notice anything :) ok, now on to what I have to say about chapter 10. I really liked it. I enjoyed "meeting" all the new characters. *dances around* guess what? I dreamt about Cori last night, and I dreamt that he was the prince! I WAS RIGHT! wow... :D Siren and Cori are betrothed! although the city of Annwn may resemble something out of a sappy fairy tale, I still think it sounds cool! no littering, too. now that might be hard to stick to if I was living there - not outside, but inside. I mean, my room? let's just say I'm not a naturally neat person. I can be, though! yep. the Wandering Way sounds like a nice place. I especially like the fact that Kel and Joren have to share a room together. lucky Kel! *rubs hands together in anticipation* Joren can be sooo sweet... :) I wish I had a Joren or a Cori around... oh well. I still get to read about them, right? ;) I wonder what the doctor will say in chapter 11. I guess the only way I'll find out is when you update. meanwhile, I'll keep dreaming! I don't think this review is going to turn out as long as the ones from chapter 8 or 9, but I'm really not in the mood. *shrugs* this is still a review anyway! keep on writing, I'll keep on reading and reviewing. *prances off to read chapter 1 of Siren's Story!* till then, cheers! -Edi
| dragonsphere 8/19/02 . chapter 1
This sucks.I cant belive my friends read this.
| Bewildered Muse 8/19/02 . chapter 10
I'm 5'2, he'd probably have to pick me up to speak to me. No problem with the idea, embarrassing scences like that are always fun to read, and write. Hope to see more soon.
| Angel-Goddess 8/19/02 . chapter 10
Ohhh.. *squeals* Wow, this chapter was ... GREAT! I sed it before, and i'll say it again, you are very talented in writing stories, especially ones that slowly lead to romance! I like the way you don't rush into the lovey-dovey scenes, like 'boy annoys girl, girl fights with boy, boy thinks of girl in a different way, boy tells girl he loves her, girl says she feels the same way, kiss, kiss, kiss'
I really like the way you write! Your much more talented in writing romance fics than i am (but then again, who isn't -_-;) Well i hope you update it soon! E-mail me again please! ()