|Reviews for Lady of the Labyrinth|
| Kyrie Twilight 4/28/13 . chapter 10
While I really like the story, you have a lot of spelling errors/ word confusion/ word misusage. You should get a Beta for this story.
| MaidMarian17 4/23/13 . chapter 18
Haha I totally caught the references in this chapter, but I'll have to search the last one! Fantastic, as usual ;) I can't wait until your next update! ;D
| excentricaluli 4/23/13 . chapter 18
well I like it I hope you have the next one soon!
| The Queen of Water 4/23/13 . chapter 18
Cool, I will wait for Chapter 18.
| hotforteacher3 4/17/13 . chapter 7
American football is rugby for wusses :) they wear tons of pads and aren't allowed to fight ;) Down here in Texas (american) football is king, after seeing some British rugby games I'm convinced its a load of shit 8)
Now wheelchair rugby. THAT'S badass.
| Madberry 4/15/13 . chapter 17
Spiced peaches are like summer. They are like cinnamon and nutmeg and wood-smoked peach, sweet carmelized maple sugar pooling in the red pit crater.
| Animegal809 4/12/13 . chapter 17
Please update more often :) I love this story, and I love how you made jareth calm and serious like that lol makes him more sexy ;)
| BT 4/12/13 . chapter 2
HI! I'm enjoying youor story so far. The bit where Sarah checked to make sure Toby wasn't a goblin was cute. In the 2nd to last paragraph, it's a "drawer," not a "draw." I know a lot of people say it like "draw," but it's not the right word. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story!
| Madberry 4/11/13 . chapter 11
Mmm David Bowie.. ;D
| Madberry 4/11/13 . chapter 8
Ahahahaha, that was awesome! I knew Kyle was gonna be a douche bag! Kinda reminds me of a Kyle I know.. Anyway, great chapter, I'm definitely following this story until the end.
| Madberry 4/11/13 . chapter 6
Interesting, giving Sarah a date and having Toby question her decision. I like the slight age difference from the movie as well, it gives it a nice dose of individuality. :)
| Madberry 4/11/13 . chapter 5
So far this is looking really good, I'm excited to see where it goes. :)
Your amazing word choices make it look more professional as well, showing off your apparently excellent vocabulary. Please, keep up the awesome work!
| MaidMarian17 4/11/13 . chapter 17
Lovely chapter! I'll never think of hide and seek the same way again ;)
| excentricaluli 4/11/13 . chapter 17
AAAAA! its nothing I like this I hope you can get the next one soon ::)
| The Queen of Water 4/11/13 . chapter 17
Cool, I Will wait for Chapter 19.