you could always make it an entrance recently found or the one in the dead land

Interesting

This is nicely written I look forward to where it is going.

This is well written, something completely different could be fun.

This is pretty good, anything that someone is so excited about I will give a chance. I do hope that you give us new back stories as it appears that the underlanders are going to be completely different in character but have the same names. It is already difficult for me to see Luxa in the overland or getting along with the rats without all of the other stuff happening. I look forward to you changing my perception.