this is one of the better Judai Asuka stories I have read you should make a sequel

Great story please make a sequel

Grea chapter what happens now?

I love this story so far but I thought you were gooing to put a lemon in this stpry

Don't fall for the people begging for lemons, there are plenty of those already.

That was a good chapter but where's the lemon?

update now !

i love it so hurry up and update

omigawd i just had to review hahaha suggesting a one night stand /creys hahaha

Another great chapter please write a Judai Asuka lemon there are far too few of those

gotta say i love it, but plz, plz have jaden be alexis first, you may not have a sex scene but maybe after they have done the deed maybe have alexis say stuff that tells us that it was her first time, plz, pretty plz?

and did she get with chazz right after she learn that jaden was with rei, and did she only do it so to try and make jaden angry and jealous?

Though this wasn't what I was looking for at all, I must admit this story is interesting and funny. I doubt I'll find something as funny, adventurous and heart wrenching as this for a while. What annoyed me however was the fact you constantly used the japanese names. Do you know how long it took me to realize ed was astor. That's annoying for the american duelist such as myself bro. Anyway, can't wait for your next chapter. Get your game on

Poor Judai I feel bad for hope but good chapter

gf

More people need to read this fic! Anyway, looks like things are about to wrap up now that Asuka knows how get rid of the spell. Can't wait till the next chapter