Sounds great! Sorry about cutting off the info before, I was typing on my iPod and I accidentally hit the OK button :P Anyways, here's the information that I was going to add, let me know if there's something missing:

Name: Rachael Taylor
Age: 12 and a half
Looks: Shoulder-length dark brown hair and chocolate brown eyes, freckles along the bridge of her nose, rosy cheeks and dimples in both cheeks
Personality: Shy, but if you get to know her, she can be sweet and funny
Crush: Chris Chambers
How she dresses: Mainly just T-shirts and jeans, but on certain occasions, she will change her wardrobe completely (starts wearing makeup, dying her hair)

Thanks a bunch, and I can't wait until your story is up and running!

For someone who's life is in '"ruins", your main character sure is a conceited narcissistic brat. Why would being an "orphan slave" leave her with common luxuries, the ability to sneak out and become tyrant ? I have no sympathy whatsoever for Holly, nor your fanfic, to the point of having to leave a review. You are a good writer, don't get me wrong, but this is NOT Stand By Me.

Hi! I really like your story do far, and I'd love for my character to be in your story, if you'll let me!

Name: Rachael Taylor
Age: 12
Appearance: brown hair, brown eyes, dim

I was interested until I found that Ace was the Prince. I mean there's someone called Chris Chambers!