| Reviews for Black Cat's Luna |
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Kirorokat 2/1/13 . chapter 2Hey, this seems like it's gonna be a pretty good story! I have one recommendation for you, though; I would recommend inserting some sort of break in the page or something to signify a character/setting change. You used them nicely, but the sudden switches with absolutely no notice made it confusing to read. Not nit-picking or anything, just giving friendly advice! |
MCRDanime 1/12/13 . chapter 2I like it but your character pov changing is a little bit confusing. I guess you should put who pov is who. Other than that it good. Please continue. Update soon! |
Black Cat Angel 1/12/13 . chapter 2I like ur story and I love Black Cat! I wish u luck on this story. |