|Reviews for Overkill|
| LADYMALLARD 5/19/13 . chapter 10
This chapter was a well done fascinating study on faith and religion and dealing with beliefs as well as the ever present fear of danger from an attacker who may be able, now that he knows Sito is alive, try to get to her...I am anxious to find out what will happen next when that monstrous Cardassian tries to get to her to finish what he and the other alien fiends started. I hope that if he does try that he gets what he deserves. I will be difficult to wait for the next chapter to find out what will happen...till next time.
| stormguard 4/22/13 . chapter 9
Brilliant LOL garbage head it wascamazing read Susan keep them coming please
| LADYMALLARD 4/22/13 . chapter 9
And the good guys win again, Yea! I loved the way everyone banded together and stood up to Dukat to protect Sito and her mom, who by the way is a very brave woman to try trading herself for her daughter to save her daughter's life. I love the comparison to Sea Gulls, a scavenger bird that Mrs. Sito gave to this Cardassian. Seems that she and her daughter are safe from any further threat. Great chapter and I can't wait to see what will happen next...till next time.
| stormguard 4/21/13 . chapter 8
THAT WAS BRILLIANT SUSAN. Loved the way you pulled that of over Gul Dukats head. But the ruse wont last to much longer.
| LADYMALLARD 4/11/13 . chapter 8
First let me say, that I've had lots of issues with my computer working a bit wonky lately and am only now getting back to my usual routine, so I apologize for not reviewing this chapter sooner...now to my review...This has been an intriguing and well done addition to this amazing story, with the DS9 crew working tirelessly to protect Sito from discovery by the Cardassians and convince them that the poor tortured woman had died, but it seems that the absence of the traditional death chant has Dukat wondering if she really is dead...Now with Sito's mother on her way to see if her daughter is alive or dead might be further proof to Dukat that he and the other Cardassian have been fooled. I hope not, but it is good to know that if the deception is caught and those monsters try to get at her, that the girl will be expertly defended. I did get a kick out of Dr. Bashir's explanation concerning calling the Cardassian's Elvi, and telling Kira about the King of Rockn' Roll's propensity for avoiding his fans, by having the announcers tell the crowd he had "Left the Building". I look forward to the next chapter to see if the Cardassians catch onto the deception, or if the crew of DS9 will have a fight on their hands to protect Sito...till next time.
| Susan Hilton 4/8/13 . chapter 8
Just testing to see if this works. I think this is the best ST story ever written,but, of course, I'm biased. I'm the author. lol
| LADYMALLARD 3/19/13 . chapter 7
This was a very emotion filled well done chapter with everyone in high protection mode and the Captain and crew of DS9 pulling every trick in the book to convince those monstrous Cardassians of Sito's demise...hopefully the holo emitters will convince them and they'll leave with out incident, but Sito's protectors are prepared to defend her if necessary. I can't wait to see what will happen next chapter...till next time.
| auroraTerra 3/19/13 . chapter 7
I would like to point out first that one line really disturbed me. Saying that the Cardassian is going to eat her unborn child is well, shocking, more or less that kind of rubbed me in the wrong way, I would recommend taking that line out, but that is my honest opinion.
Other than that, I find the rest of the entire story rather enjoyable, you got the relatonship between Kira and Dukat pretty much correct, and I really like the reference back to Captain Picard and Nurse Ogawa back on the Enterprise D. So like I said before, I have no problem with teh story other than the first paragraph which is kind of graphic, but amazingly, you astounded me again with your writing! Looking forward to the next chapter!
| stormguard 3/13/13 . chapter 6
Very well written Susan very good. Its among the best to date.
| LADYMALLARD 3/10/13 . chapter 6
Great well constructed chapter, seems even though she is on the mend thanks to Dr. Bashir and his medical expertise, Sito is still experiencing the terror she went thru at the hands of her Cardassian abductors in frightening dreams. I thought it was good of Major Kira to be with her and suggest a delicacy from her home world to comfort her and now just when it seemed that she doesn't have anything to worry about besides recovering her heath, the last one of her captures has discovered her escape and has been sent to track her down and kill her, if he does locate her, Worf and the Deep Space 9 security with have their hands full I expect...I'll be on pins and needles wondering what will happen...till next time.
| auroraTerra 2/27/13 . chapter 1
This really takes on a dark tone but I like it! I hate Sisko personally but your story so far is excellent!
| stormguard 2/25/13 . chapter 5
Another great chater Susan very well writen can'tt wait for the next chapter. Keep up the reat work.
| LADYMALLARD 2/24/13 . chapter 5
This has been a well done chapter, with Worf extending an honor to Sito as well as being there to protect her from harm. It is too bad she couldn't tell him just how many of those genetically altered Cardassians she disposed of while escaping her captivity. I'm glad she at least, is recovering and has had her record from the academy changed with the help of Captain Picard and her other superiors. I hope that her recovery will continue and that she won't be plagued with too many more nightmares of the torture she went through. I will anxiously await the next chapter to see what will happen...till next time.
| stormguard 2/13/13 . chapter 4
Really great Susan. Love the way you bring the past back. Another great chapter.
| LADYMALLARD 2/12/13 . chapter 4
Quite an amazing chapter, with Sito reliving in a nightmare the torture those monstrous Cardassians put her thru, as well as a dream that seemed to be a deep seated guilt, generated by an unfortunate event in which another cadet died and she was reprimanded for at the academy. I am glad that Capt. Picard is coming himself to talk with the poor tortured girl to try and help her over all her nightmares concerning the Academy accident and I hope that the Captain, his counselor and nurse will be able to help in Sito's recovery. I look forward to the next chapter anxiously to see what will happen next...till next time.