| Reviews for Unravel |
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Nana Pie 3/10/13 . chapter 9 I LIKEIT! LOL! |
Yuki Candy Heart 2/15/13 . chapter 9Hana is the best! I wish she was my younger sister, that would be awesome! |
xXFanAticXx 2/4/13 . chapter 8Thanks for this chapter, I think it was really good and i LOLed when hana thought she was a mailgirl. keep up the good work. |
Yuki Candy Heart 2/3/13 . chapter 8Got to love ice's cooking! |
Yuki Candy Heart 1/24/13 . chapter 7Lol! I love it! Update soon! |
AssassinWitch 1/24/13 . chapter 7I love how even the previous princess compares Hana's inability to sing with her own ability to cook |
O.o 1/24/13 . chapter 5 Please don't let any cannon characters fall in love. I mean 12 year old girl and 20 something dudes?! *eww*' |
Yuki Candy Heart 1/21/13 . chapter 6Lol! Awesome chapter! Update ASAP |
GrrBear 1/19/13 . chapter 6Haha. This was funny. Sun would totally do that. I'm curious as to Sun and Hana's past. Maybe add a bit on their history in a later chapter? :) |
Yuki Candy Heart 1/16/13 . chapter 5EPIC LOL! I LOVE HANA! |
GrrBear 1/16/13 . chapter 1Has potential! I'm expecting some interesting things from this fic! :) |
GustofWind 1/16/13 . chapter 5 I warn you now that if you plan to make some of the canon characters fall for her then you gave to tread carefully or else Hana might become one of the first Mary-Sues in LSK |
GustofWind 1/14/13 . chapter 4 I guess i can compromise seeing how I'm not the one writting it but I like this a bit more because its longer. But the fact that it's short urks me... |
GustofWind 1/11/13 . chapter 3 Chapters should be longer and it's sort of confusing that you have her suddenly appear like that. No build up? No sort of point where she was instantly put in a position where she would die? Kinda cliched but it's better than having little to none action. |
Guest 1/11/13 . chapter 2 Sun is an orphan... |