|Reviews for The Humanity Factor|
| Supper Hot Turk 3/13/13 . chapter 1
Yet another fantastic story! You really are a great writer.
| DakotaCelt 2/5/13 . chapter 1
Nice job with a good balance between heartache and humor.
| jada951 1/21/13 . chapter 1
A real challenge to realistically write this type of rescue and aftermath.
A challenge that is well met in this story!
I think the snarkiness back and forth between the guys, is probably
realistic too, as rescue workers try to cope with the unexpected, dangerous, scary part of the job.
And Jenny being on the bus - and almost missed! Roy can be as miffed as he
wants, if it wasn't for Johnny, I doubt they could have made it back in time to get her out alive (shock, hurt, exposed to the elements.)
As a parent I can understand Roy's gut reaction, but his jealousy is a bit tough to take. And Johnny really wasn't trying for that praise either.
tough trust exercises too. but they came thru as the champions and heroes that they are.
Gotta say, I love the dog, Fred.
| Bamboozlepig 1/17/13 . chapter 1
Very poignant, with the right touches of humor. Excellent read!
| GageDeSotofan 1/16/13 . chapter 1
Good one, really enjoyed this story. Thanks for the fun.
| Hilda 1/12/13 . chapter 1
Wonderful story, I like so much, poor Johnny!, jjaja.
| ploring 1/12/13 . chapter 1
What a wonderful story, so much emotion and so original!
| karen 1/12/13 . chapter 1
| SaraiEsq 1/12/13 . chapter 1
Nicely done. Lots of good stuff herein. :-)
| 5secondrule 1/11/13 . chapter 1
Love love love! So many great one- liners intertwined with a great story. WOOT!
| sandra6820012002 1/11/13 . chapter 1
I cannot wait to see what happens
| lovepeacebird 1/11/13 . chapter 1
What an awesome story i could not stop reading it intil i was done :)
| Alana Carol 1/11/13 . chapter 1
Like all your stories alot of fun and alot of things to think about. Respectful of the originaql characters as they were on the show but with your own personal twist and interpitations.
| sandybeliever 1/11/13 . chapter 1
Loved this! Thank you. *big grin*
| ginabelle64 1/11/13 . chapter 1
Oh wow! What a great story! I really did enjoy it!