|Reviews for Sealing Away Fate!|
| michelle88222 3/25/13 . chapter 9
Yep! Chihiro's last name is Ogino . It was a really good chapter and damn you Shi! You seem like a huge idiot...-_- XD hehe
| WhiteTiger246 3/25/13 . chapter 9
Chihiro could never love anyone else; why can't Shi understand that? I like L
| Ialiceiamagodness 3/25/13 . chapter 9
| Guest 3/19/13 . chapter 8
OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY Z COMTINUE ON THIS PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTIUE
| WhiteTiger246 3/19/13 . chapter 8
Shi's cute, but Haku is still the one for Chihiro. :3
| Ialiceiamagodness 3/19/13 . chapter 8
i like it.
keep up the good work
| Yokai-wish 3/18/13 . chapter 5
I have to admit I wrote this chappy blindly!
But I think I'll start and write the chapters longer now...even though it's hard work!
| Guest 3/15/13 . chapter 7
But where is Haku?!
| WhiteTiger246 3/12/13 . chapter 7
*Gasp*! No! Haku only! D:
I loving this! :3
| Ialiceiamagodness 3/12/13 . chapter 7
| Yokai-wish 3/4/13 . chapter 3
Yay! starting the next chappy. it'll be done soon. At least I think. I think ...think...think...think...and write...write...write...write...write...sigh...
| Yokai-wish 3/4/13 . chapter 4
Arg! My bad my bad my bad! sorry I told you guys that I'll publish in February but...I didn't did I? I'll post my status on my profile on how fast the story are getting done. OK...
| Yokai-wish 2/14/13 . chapter 2
I reread this chapter and the first chapter maybe I should have put more thought into this chappy. I don't know why but it just seems a little...boring. So sorry for the spelling errs. M maybe I should go over my chapters again or something like that. right. :/?
This needs more editing.
'Haku...I wonder if granny let him go? Does he miss me? I miss him. It was like a dream but it was real. The bath house and the boiler man, Kamaji. Oh! And Rin, if it were anything else she could be my sister...I wonder how everybody is doing? '
Instead of Rin it was supposed to be Lin. I hope you guys caught in with that sorry.:/
LOL. Now another part.
My tears stopped the instant I heard a door slam and something crash to the floor somewhere in this school...or more like from inside somebody's locker in the hallway.
I shook my head thinking I'm dreaming but listened closer.
"Shhh. Somebody will hear us!"
"It was your idea to come hear in the first place."
"Oh! Shut up! Your the one who Came up with idea!"
"That's what you say but I have proof it was you who cam..."
"Like I said be quiet! Or are you planing for me to make you into frog soup?!"
"I...I woulf...bef...thaf f-good!"
" Are you sure? I mean you look really...really green and tasty." (Not!)'
Lets see I was trying to give you an explanation on who were in the locker and what they looked like. It turned out ...interesting I guess.:D
Thanks for reading the first chapter.
' "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!" I listened to Lin and the frog scream!
"WERE GOING TO DIE!" The frog continued to scream." I don't want to die in this HUMAN PLACE!"
"Oh, be quiet, this is strange,... abnormal really. A human wouldn't stay and investigate." Zeniba figured.
"What will we do! I won't be able to eat any more Nori! We'll die in this place! I know it! I know it's Fate!" The frog wailed.
"Sheesh! Be quiet! We can't hear a single thing with all your racket!" Zeniba yelled at the frog.
I continued to Bang on the locker's door although the screaming had stopped. OK, now is my chance, I just hope that I'm not wrong!Maybe its just my imagine nation...Well I'll see in a second...'
I guess that was more like a . ;/
'"Oops! Sorry are you OK?!"
"NOOO! SOMEBODY IS BITING ME BUTT!" The person Cried out!'
LOl. well I couldn't ignore that granny was sitting on I decided to play with that scene. ;D
'"No,...I'm afraid I have bad news." Lin and Zeniba told me together.
I gulped. and nodded for them to go on.
"You see the other day when Lin was going to give Haku his dinner, he wasn't in his cell." Zeniba began.
"I ran to see Yubaba, since I knew because of his state he would be in danger. When I got there she told me not to worry...she said they were on a deal so she put Haku somewhere were he wanted to go except the human world. Then she said, it was useless to look for him because," Lin stopped for a second then continued.
Now this is when the story begins I was wondering how many chapters it would take to get to this part the main theme. Nobody can miss this can they. Well again thanks for reading I hope you enjoy the story a lot more later on. ;D
| Yokai-wish 2/8/13 . chapter 1
People who read these chapters, I thank you! Don't be shy to correct me on something, or say that scene was lame, or say you spelled _ wrong. I'd love to make this story more enjoyable for you guys and gals! After all that is what an author should do right!? :)
Don't forget to give me ideas. Go for it give me ideas at any random god forsaken time OK! ;D
Also Thank You For All Of Your Awesome Reviews! ;D :D ;D
| Rina Saki 2/8/13 . chapter 1
This is an awesome book! Please continue!