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| devoted reader 2008-08-29 ch 36, anon. | abusei am looking forward to the next release! i really want to know what Rinoa is going to do! and i can't wait for Rinoa to "run into" Squall again because i know that's going to happen!! |
| DragonGirl323 2008-08-24 ch 36, | abuseGod this story is amazing! And I never really noticed how many reviews this thing had...holy cow! Great job! This story is a true piece of art! I can't wait until the next chapter! :] Sincerely, DragonGirl323 |
| Squalleternally 2008-08-22 ch 36, anon. | abuseGreat chapter, really enjoyed it. Been waiting and waiting for each new chapter its quality. please dont keep us waiting TOO long for the next one. im eagerly waiting. keep up the awesome work. Thanks :D Squalleternally. |
| Rini_magic 2008-08-20 ch 36, anon. | abuseYAY! new chappie! You guys are awesome. Keep write! I love this Fic! |
| The Age of Consent 2008-08-18 ch 36, | abuseSuch a beautiful, tender story. I'm definitely looking forward to more. |
| Azurite 2008-08-18 ch 36, | abuseAh, an agonizing period of time between updates! And I'm still left hanging because we've got so many potential things coming together (yet again) to collide. At least a part of the tension between Elise and Squall is "resolved," or at least out in the open. I'm glad Elise isn't one of those "written to be hated" sort of "other woman" characters; she's very well-fleshed out. Hope to see more soon! |
| Crystal Cat-chan 2008-08-17 ch 36, | abuseGo Get him Rin! The Knight needs his Lady as much as the Socerceress needs her Knight! *Hugs them both, sends Elise off to a corner with a cookier and pats her on the head* Thanks for understanding, dear. I Have a fealing the next chapter will bring fireworks, and I look forward to every spark! Great chapter |
| Optical Goddess 2008-08-16 ch 36, | abuseOoh, that was good. Arg, I just want Elise to tell him about their bond already! I like this little fight they had. And where is Rinoa gonna go with Maude? |
| Seelenspiel 2008-08-16 ch 36, | abuseI can't tell you guys often enough how much I love this story! Great update - though I feel really sorry for both Squall and Rinoa XD |
| Rosa Heartlily 2008-08-14 ch 36, | abuseAh, good old Maude! One of my favourite comic creations. Love the idea of her and Rinoa doing a Thelma and Louise :D And I'm glad Elise gave Squall a good slap - it's what he needs. |
| Rinoica 2008-08-14 ch 36, | abuseHello there :) Yea, I'm still alive, and I'm still reading every chapter you publish :) I'm trying to pull some of my friends into ff8 world (semi-successfully) and my latest weapon are the lines from your chapters I paste to them. I know they would enjoy in reading your stories, I just have to make them believe that too :D Oh, yea, and I really enjoyed this chapter too :) (just for your curiosity, the lines I pasted then were the ones between squall and Elise - loved them) Been missing you, Rinoica |
| chrisVIII 2008-08-14 ch 36, | abuseah, honestly, I have mixed feeling about this chapter... First, I'm glad you're not giving up, but I know you won't so I don't worry to much, still, it's nice to read you still enjoy writing it :) Second, hm... the chapter has a slight taste of "unfinished". I mean, usually, your chapters work as a unit, it really brings somewhere and we can notice a progression. Here, I don't really have the impression we moved from the previous situation. Yes things happen, yes, things are said but it's still not enough to really mark an evolution. however, what is written is as usual very well written, the words are precise and the reading fluid, it's a pleasure :) I'm now wondering what the Linoa's trip will look like: she and Maude ? can't she tell Maude she needs to do this alone ? Oh, I found Maude very helpfull and wise in a certain measure but here she interfering with Rinoa's business and I'm surprized Rinoa is allowing it... We can feel the end is drawing near and with that the tension is increasing, I wish the story would speed up a bit, because I have so no idea how it's going to end ! I can only see a dramatic ending... but the characters deserve a happy end so I trust you to find what will be best :) I hope next time we'll be in Esthar and the truth will be revealed, I'm wondering how everyone will react and how much will be told, who's going to tell Squall about the sorceress/knight connection ? Elise, Cid or Edea ? there are so many questions that need answers ! |
| jade destiny 2008-08-13 ch 36, | abuseyay! an update! i was beginning to forget about this story. i cant wait for the next chapter. this one was so powerful. i love the troubled feelings that are going through everyone. it makes the story so much more interesting. |
| LawlietxRinoa 2008-08-12 ch 36, | abuseYESS! thank you for updating. it made me depressed the whole time that you didn't update... =( please update again soon! this is such a good heartwrenching, romance, drama story! sorta like Crimson Lies. |
| r 2008-08-12 ch 36, anon. | abuseGood chapter. Good story. |