I think this is well written. I like Dishonored because the plot was so loosely made, it allows us fic authors to explore the endless possibilities.

Oh! And a word to the wise, watch out for a flamer calling themselves The Fox Familiar.

This is it right? You're not going to add more, are you? You shouldn't because it's perfect like this. My, that have me chills.

Ooooh I like this! Please, write more!