I like it. Plz update soon :D

Just a bit of info here. The Queen Anne's Revenge must have had at least 74 guns. A fourteen gun ship Isn't even a ship of the line (Fighting Vessel) It's more of a brig or a sloop if that.

Mm... can't wait to see the pirates react to that declaration!

Ahh- goodie, so now we get Percy and Jack together. I have no doubt about any pirate, certainly witty Jack to honor a son of Poseidon - they spend their lives at sea, and would be stupid to ever displease the sea god... Plus, pirates most likely carried the tradition of honoring Poseidon long after Roman invasion... Not like they'd be honoring laws made by some landlubbers, eh?

I delly like this but your useing to much modern language Such as Dude. Do you really think people from that time period would use words like that? But other than that its great :D

Very good so far

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

Very creative names you got there :)
This is interesting... I'd like to see longer chapters though.

i love jack
upload soon please

This is great, you brought Jack into it, YAY ! :D

LOVE IT! Can't wait for you to update again. Btw, I think Tia Dalma's accent is spot-on. I can just picture her saying it. I am excited to see what's coming next and how Percy will react with the rest of the crew.

Pls update soon!
I love it!

Ha Ha. Dave is hilarious. By the way, Percy left his mother behind in the Underworld in the book version. Grover stayed behind in the movie version of the Lightning Thief. Are you going by the movie version of the lightning thief?

This is hilarious! I love the story so far, and your characters are good, and I can't wait to see how this will go.
One thing I would like to point out, that you don't have to listen to (just some friendly constructive criticism)
- Don't repeat the same word in a sentence/small paragraph. You did it a few times, like in the three sentence paragraph that starts with 'I should at least eat what I have', in which you said 'bread' several times. Try to use other words, or even just 'it', because using the same word can bore the reader and make the paragraph feel repetitive. But this isn't a hard and fast rule, so if you think you should break it, go ahead.
Please, I don't mean to offend you! But my creative writing teacher said the same thing to me, and it's better to hear it off some random on the internet than someone whose opinion actually matters to you!
Please update this amazing story soon!

Please update soon! This is such a good story! I can't wait for chapter 5!