|Reviews for Written in the Stars|
| PhoenixedDragon 1/13/13 . chapter 1
First off, I have to agree with your point of view. Fairy Tail would never "replace" or "kick out" Lucy for Lisanna. They're Fairy Tail... that would be the epitome of out of character for them. Plus, Lisanna is a really nice person, to a point where she falls on the naively idealistic. (sort of like Lucy).
But anyways, I love what you did with this story because you described the suggested growing emotions between Natsu and Lucy perfectly. There were the points where you played with your imagination and described the Edo Natsu and Edo Lucy relationship and their wedding in Earthland, but those moments where you went ahead and delved into the cannon episodes between the two were wonderfully depicted. You really showed the inner emotions and deeper meanings behind the shell.
Your conjectures about what will happen during the Grand Magic Games and the Dragon King's Festival were also well displayed. You didn't focus on something too particular, but rather utilized the overwhelming sense of doom oppressing the story already and the general mood Mashima has mentioned about the story growing in scope to your advantage to just push the plot to the confession and then move on to their wedding. Your slight hint at "her" being the one who saved them all is, in my opinion, very accurate. I think that explains Charle's vision perfectly without having to have Lucy die within the collapsing Mercurious.
Finally, how you used Draco to show the meeting point between their forms of magic was brilliant! With that, you really gave a wonderful, new, and innovative twist to the trope of the "written in the stars" fate.
| CupcakeGirl633 1/13/13 . chapter 1
Awww, this is such an amazing story, and I like how you wrote it in Lisanna's POV. Normally when people write in Lisanna's POV, she's usually evil, which is something I don't like. I'm glad you let Lisanna approve them, and I really like how you kinda proved that Natsu and Lucy were meant to be. I love this story, and I like the spacings of the words too. I love how it's long and detailed, and I was able to picture everything in my head! This is by far one of my favorite one-shots. I know I like a lot of stories, but this is one of my top 10 one-shots! Thanks for creating this story! I love it!
| Jounin Saryn 1/13/13 . chapter 1
this was really good and i agree with you on the fact that it is a little harsh that Lisana always get the place of the jealous b**ch (pardon my french but i couldn't think of a different word to use) but is actually i really nice person. could you maybe do a sequel from either Natsu or Lucy's pov. this is most definetly one of my favs *thumbs up* :D
| nalua93 1/13/13 . chapter 1
That was just perfect. There's no other way to say it. :)
| fairytail96 1/13/13 . chapter 1
I was so good that I read this story many times! w
| Chiharu Himeji 1/13/13 . chapter 1
That was truly a beautiful story indeed! Its written so well till the end n I enjoyed reading it very much. This will definitely go to my all time favs stories;)I really like the idea that u put this into lisanna's pov,which is rare but that makes it so much more special in this case hope to see u write more nalu stories in the future:D
| Kayline 1/13/13 . chapter 1
It was one of the most well written stories I ever read! I'm not usually all so fond of romance and all, but it was so wonderfully written that I couldn't not read it until the end.
It was a very good idea to write it from Lisanna's point of view. I couldn't help but smile while reading. And usually, if I smile or express any good emotion while reading, it means it's a good one!
So really, thank you for this beautiful one shot.