Love the story. More please.

Yay! Another chapter release! I was kind of lost in this chapter and only actually got what your saying 70% of the time. But I got most of it. More development, but not as flowing as your previous chapter. This story sounds great, keep up the good work!

Lol the way they treat mahiro is pretty funny. Love this lots.

Nice that he is still holding on to Yoshino even after all these years. Like it so far and cant wait to see what happens next.

Yet another person with talent for writing tempest fanfiction but doesn't... -constructive criticism- It was all going swimmingly untill that last line. May as well have ended at "I have found Yoshino-San" that last bit is half justified, half "just to put it out there". Other than that though there was no OOC and the AU is a good set out for a long series that I know everyone wants. Your writing style is smooth and easy to read. I really do suggest continuing with this and testing the water out! You can expect a review from me every chapter you make of so!

Oh, this fic seem interesting. I want read more :)
I have a question, ¿This is a fanfic yaoi? If it doesn't, it's fine. But if it's, oh, I'll so so grateful.

is this story gonna have Mahiro and Yoshino as a couple if not i plan on reading it anyway plz continue soon its so short and i am curious what the plot is and how this story plays out it was good btw