|Reviews for Third Time is the Charm|
| Yuu3 5/3/13 . chapter 2
Love the story. More please.
| Kasavon 2/5/13 . chapter 2
Yay! Another chapter release! I was kind of lost in this chapter and only actually got what your saying 70% of the time. But I got most of it. More development, but not as flowing as your previous chapter. This story sounds great, keep up the good work!
| 27CansOfTuna 2/5/13 . chapter 2
Lol the way they treat mahiro is pretty funny. Love this lots.
| 27CansOfTuna 2/1/13 . chapter 1
Nice that he is still holding on to Yoshino even after all these years. Like it so far and cant wait to see what happens next.
| Kasavon 1/27/13 . chapter 1
Yet another person with talent for writing tempest fanfiction but doesn't... -constructive criticism- It was all going swimmingly untill that last line. May as well have ended at "I have found Yoshino-San" that last bit is half justified, half "just to put it out there". Other than that though there was no OOC and the AU is a good set out for a long series that I know everyone wants. Your writing style is smooth and easy to read. I really do suggest continuing with this and testing the water out! You can expect a review from me every chapter you make of so!
| laynad3 1/25/13 . chapter 1
Oh, this fic seem interesting. I want read more :)
I have a question, ¿This is a fanfic yaoi? If it doesn't, it's fine. But if it's, oh, I'll so so grateful.
| snowprinces 1/13/13 . chapter 1
is this story gonna have Mahiro and Yoshino as a couple if not i plan on reading it anyway plz continue soon its so short and i am curious what the plot is and how this story plays out it was good btw