Thats good the mystery is unraveling somewhat

loved it

Nice wonder who the mysterious people are

This is a really excellent fanfiction, I must say. :D kudos to you! You have a nice writing style, I appreciate that, and also the storyline is mysterious and good. Can't wait to read more of this fic, hope you update soon! :)

nice

Really nice hope things work out

loved it

Cant wait for more its interesting.

The minute that the 2 chapter came out, I read it in five minutes. Please update soon!

Cant wait to see whats next

loved it

Again with the cliffhangers? Why must the world be so cruel?! It's flowing perfectly, like a kite in the breeze, and then the lightning hits it and it burns to your hand until the whole of your being is burning. And then, you begin to crave. You want more and more and begin checking your e-mail for updates at least twice every day. And when it finally does come, you scarf it down like a starving beast, and the pattern begins again. Please update soon!

loved it

PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL!

I love it! It's so good that it could be a sequel! You never cease to amaze me, and I hope you have this planned out so there's a quick update! Thanks, TheyCallMeLittleFoot