Haha, okay, when you described how Ryou ahd his hair in his face in order to hide the Eye, yeah, I got a total mental image of an Emo Ryou. Hahaha, wow, funny. Okay. :) Great chapter! Love it.

Again, really awesome. Very fitting end for the thief, and absolutely something Ryou would come up with - the dark one is contained without being hurt. Although, that last few lines seemed to hint at a possible third story. Is there one being planned?

Nice story! That was god...

Your A/N's where rather...M-rated, I guess. Good though. They made this seem like 2 fics in 1!

Poor Yami Bakura...

Nice chapter. The A/N was rather disturbing...

I really enjoy reading your story. Don't worry, there aren't any plot holes in this one. (: Or any of your others that I've read, for that matter.

I like the way you used real side effects of concusions instead of making up your own; it makes the story *much* more believable.

Your A/N's are interesting. Zany, yet interesting.

I tried to visit the website with your fanart, but I was bombarded by pop-ads and was unable to find your work. I would have liked to see it...

Good story!

i liked this fic it was as good as your other one.
great job ^.^

I really like the side story, lol, especially Yami Malik's caffeine-induced fantasies.
The plot's so good! You have to continue writing. Poor Ryou...

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(Huggles all Marick plushies...)
Yolei: Oh god that's destriubing...
Randa: You can't even spell desturbing!
Yolei: Nether can you!
Randa: Damn...

It was Ryou's Mom. he saw her cuz well the eye let Pegsy see cecila so now it let Ryou see his mom. I want ryou and bakura to deliver my cookie.

lOVE IT

That was awsome! My friend took you off my favoriteslist so I have to put you back on AND FAST!!

Another awesome story ^_^ I like the side story the best though! Is it okay for me to use somewhate of Maliks personalitly in a fic of mine? He'll be a pervert still, but more smooth, along the lines of Miroku. I'm goa make Yami Malik a crazy person ^_^ I loved how Ryou kicked Bakura out of the kichen!!

So Yami Bakura is NAKED!?! BOO-YAH!! It's my birthday come eraly!! ^_^

o.o have the Sugar-addicts Dream more often! Yami Malik without a shirt it HOT!! He's so funny ^_^ Awesome story too! I read both at the same time, cause i want to find out what happens, but I'm not a big fan of angst

Umm... not to be a nucence or anything, but my computer hates me and wont let me see chapter 3 for this story. If it wouldn't be too much trouble, could you please send the chapter to me on my email? Just click on my name and you'll find my site with my email. You don't have to if you're too busy. Love your storyies by the way! Especialy the YGO/HP crossover one ^_^