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0208
2009-08-11 . chapter 2
Nice story i realy wanted to know what hapens after match well atleast i try to do rest in my head and let my fiction finish it but it will never be the same as you might have imagen it. Thank you for story its sad its dead.
Black-Dax
2007-02-26 . chapter 2
i know this is random but i just wanted to ask if the font you used for this was 'Comic Sans'?

Great story tho
Demonic Dragon Knight
2006-01-28 . chapter 2
I so want to see how this story turns out I hope you have not abandoned it because there are so many places you can take this story.

But never the less it is a great story
roy
2006-01-26 . chapter 2
please continue this story
anonymous
2005-04-13 . chapter 1
who finds out about them first and do they marry even though they won
Motoko 'n' Zan 4 ever friends
2005-01-03 . chapter 1
MORE!
Motoko n zan 4 ever
2004-11-29 . chapter 1
i am sorry i sweared ok!! i loved it i just want you to no!! and plz don't block me
Motoko 'n' Zan 4 ever friends
2004-11-28 . chapter 2
** NEED MORE
KeitaroMokoto 4 ever Of The Dark Icon Writers
2004-06-17 . chapter 2
how much longer untill the next chp comes out i hope it is soon!
Tulkas
2004-05-22 . chapter 2
A shame. I assume by now that this fic is dead. I would have liked to see where you'd go from here.
WarriorDemon
2004-01-31 . chapter 2
one of the better stories i have read here keep it coming
Adam McDonald
2003-02-18 . chapter 2
i think this was a great story. needs more detail and spell checking.my second favorite fanfic story wise though. good job
Kaolla: Version Two
2003-02-02 . chapter 1
Very rushed. And... emotion-less. It just happens, and then there's the big chunky paragraphs...

Plus, Motoko, even at this point, would sitll rather have Tama perform cunnlingus on her before she screwed Keitaro.

2002-12-14 . chapter 1
..." then it happen. That look + fine looking girl + said girl only in button up shirt and panties + one sexually deprived young man = one very bad situation. oh how so true"
Vivi239
2002-12-13 . chapter 2
Please add the next chapter soon!
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