Nice story i realy wanted to know what hapens after match well atleast i try to do rest in my head and let my fiction finish it but it will never be the same as you might have imagen it. Thank you for story its sad its dead.

i know this is random but i just wanted to ask if the font you used for this was 'Comic Sans'?

Great story tho

I so want to see how this story turns out I hope you have not abandoned it because there are so many places you can take this story.

But never the less it is a great story

please continue this story

who finds out about them first and do they marry even though they won

MORE!

i am sorry i sweared ok!! i loved it i just want you to no!! and plz don't block me

** NEED MORE

how much longer untill the next chp comes out i hope it is soon!

A shame. I assume by now that this fic is dead. I would have liked to see where you'd go from here.

one of the better stories i have read here keep it coming

i think this was a great story. needs more detail and spell checking.my second favorite fanfic story wise though. good job

Very rushed. And... emotion-less. It just happens, and then there's the big chunky paragraphs...

Plus, Motoko, even at this point, would sitll rather have Tama perform cunnlingus on her before she screwed Keitaro.

..." then it happen. That look + fine looking girl + said girl only in button up shirt and panties + one sexually deprived young man = one very bad situation. oh how so true"

Please add the next chapter soon!