|Reviews for Eternally|
| iluvskyfunky 6/15/13 . chapter 45
Holy... crap... Absolutely fan-frigging-tastic!
First of all, let me compliment you on the AMAZING job you did on combining these three stories together... everything fit so well! Mindblown. Awesome job!
Second, the smaller details were wonderful too: there was just the right amount of drama and humor, and never too much tension or angst at once... very realistic, which is very nice to read.
Third, for the most part, the actual writing was very well done. Sentences were formed correctly, for the most part, but the main thing I liked was that each sentence and each paragraph flowed into each other. So many writers' writing is choppy... this was so smooth... Well done!
A few minor things to work on concerning the grammar: be careful on singular/plural. For example, when you writer "her eyes closes," you're mixing singular and plural words. It should either be "her eyes close" or "her eye closes,"... make sense? And then with that comes with mixing your tenses: past vs. present kind of thing. So with that example, instead of those two, I wonder if you meant to write "her eyes (or eye) closed"... make sense? Please, if you have any questions, let me know.
BUT HOLY CRAP THIS STORY WAS AMAZING! :-D You did and amazing job on this!
| Kriesha 5/2/13 . chapter 45
Oh thank Merlin I'm back at work and I can catch up with my reading, I was going crazy at home without access to my favourite story!
Anyway... What a perfect ending for a perfect story, I can't thank you enough for sharing this wonderful piece with us. It's been a giant thrill ride, you made me swoon, gush, cry... I loved these characters as if they were all friends, I lived the story along them, and now I'm both happy to know they have their happy ever after and crushed to let them go...
Have lovely holidays dear, and take care, I'll miss you and your crazy stories (and I'll be hoping to read more from you one day ;))
| rjt040190 4/26/13 . chapter 45
Oh God, I cant .. i just cant..
*sobs like a little girl*...
Oh God, the vows were So touching and beautiful.
thank u THANK U THANK U SO MUCH for sharing this ...
| bonesbemmettlover 4/25/13 . chapter 45
OMG! That was perfect!
| medwards245 4/25/13 . chapter 45
I'm really sorry this story is over, I've loved every minute I spent reading it. I did almost go crazy keeping up with things but when we told you that, you got us back on track. The only bad thing about this story was the torture of waiting for updates, even though you updated very quickly it was never enough, the story is that good. I've started reading it over again and noticed your added notes. Now that I know the whole story it's all so clear and I can't believe I didn't follow things the first time through. I'll keep following you in case you decide to write again and I hope in time you will. Thank you for sharing this wonderful, complicated story with us.
| Oa17 4/25/13 . chapter 45
awwwww i think my heart just melted with the vows!
| Megrock7 4/25/13 . chapter 45
Love, love, love. Great ending!
| bonesbemmettlover 4/22/13 . chapter 44
AWW! that was HOT!
| medwards245 4/22/13 . chapter 44
Loved it once again, which is no suprise with this story. It's nice to see that there's a lot of Beast left in Vincent, it just makes him so sweet, loving and considerate. You would think after 4 years together there wouldn't be much they hadn't tried in bed, but it sounds like Vincent has been holding back so Catherine could be in for a lot of fun. I'm looking forward to Part 3 of the epilogue.
| Kriesha 4/22/13 . chapter 44
I was wondering what had happened to Scumbag-Cheating-Ex-Fiancé Evan after all this time, I guess I have my answer now ;) So he transferred to Vincent's precinct (by the way, is Vincent a uni? a detective? meaningless detail, I know, but I was curious, and it doesn't hurt to ask :p)? That's a petty move, and I understand Vincent's urge to beat the pulp out of him, but I guess seeing Catherine happy with another guy is punishment enough...
Poor Vincent, he should not feel insecure towards Evan, eight years cannot compare to the few lives he and Catherine have spent loving each other ;)
Anyway, excellent chapter as usual dear, I love how they still manage to discover things about each other, even after four years spent together :))
| bonesbemmettlover 4/19/13 . chapter 43
| medwards245 4/19/13 . chapter 43
4 years and 2 kids later they are still completely crazy in love and hot for each other, that's so sweet. Glad to see that the kids haven't killed their sex drive, put a damper on it, but not killed it. I'm sorry that you're not going to continue writing, but at least we have this nice long story to go back to. I look forward to the next part.
| Kriesha 4/19/13 . chapter 43
Excellent chapter as always, I loved reading about their married life, and it's heartwarming to know that 4 years later, despite the difficulties of everyday life, their love is stronger than ever.
So, Vincent is a cop now? It suits him well, he is meant to serve and protect :)
Can't wait for the second part of the epilogue, and I've got to say, I'll miss you and your crazy stories a lot ;)
| rjt040190 4/18/13 . chapter 42
I am requesting... i am requesting an epilogue! :)
This was an Amazing story.. thank u So much for sharing.
| Fractal Cat 4/16/13 . chapter 42
That was a wonderfully positive and upbeat way to end this story. It has left me grinning to myself, happy to know that you have left these characters on the mend, and comfortably wrapped around each others' hearts. I would love to see an epilogue, perhaps including Lumiere and JT, but I'm sure I'll love anything that you care to write.