 NamiC 5/20/07 . chapter 1By far my FAVORITE fanfic and one of THE best ones i've ever read. so many forget the characters and destroy their personalities but you stayed true to how the characters react. go you! great story as well. if i was a guy, i would ask you to marry me ;) haha just kidding |
 Jupiter Green 5/19/07 . chapter 42O.O
*cries*
THERE MUST BE MORE!
And how sad for Vinnie and Yuffie. T.T
But you know, I hope Tifa kicks that Montana's ass. He needs a major tune up. :D
Well done. If you have me for 40 some chapters, I would say I am pretty hooked. Keep it up!
Love and Luck,
Kat |
 Zozma 5/19/07 . chapter 42Aah, I only just got around to checking this fic again.
I thought it was dead, you know.
Can't recall if I've reviewed before; if not, I'm sorry.
This is my absolute favorite FF7 story I've ever read. You're a brilliant writer; you put everyone else who writes FF7 fictions to shame. I eagerly await more chapters of this brilliant work of art |
 Jupiter Green 5/14/07 . chapter 12Yuffie has the best one liners EVER.
Good ol' Vincent and Yuffie.
What a load of tension, though. Damn. I hope they all get their rears in gear, eh? :D
Love and Luck,
Kat |
 Jupiter Green 5/14/07 . chapter 11ROFL
I would have liked to see Cloud and Reno really get into it. That might have been really humorous.
But, Yuffie's comment at the end is priceless.
*haha*
Well Done!
Love and Luck,
Kat |
 Jupiter Green 5/14/07 . chapter 9Never been a Tifa/Reno woman, myself, but I guess Strife needs some competition and you do it quite tastefully.
I'll stick around for the ride. ;)
Love and Luck,
Kat |
 Jupiter Green 5/14/07 . chapter 8Aw. . .the Yuffentine goodness is ALWAYS appreciated.
Well written. You capture Vincent's brooding essence very well. And despite playing Yuffie's less charming qualities a lot, I am seemingly falling in love with her voice/role in this story as well.
Excellent! :D
Love and Luck,
Kat |
 Jupiter Green 5/14/07 . chapter 5DUDE, YOU FREAKIN ROCK FOR THE DEVO SONG!
God, that song ROCKS. :D
And, hey, it took me YEARS to do battle scenes. I have found, if it helps, that if I write a bare sketch or rundown of a battle scene as a whole, and then go back and edit a couple of days or hours later, whichever fits my mood best, I find that I can write a better scene.
I tend to write WAY Longer than one chapter a sitting. I will write about 20 chapters of a story before posting. That gives me some time to see how people are going to react to it and then I can incorporate their ideas and wants into the story via chapter editing. I find that this works exceptionally well with battle scenes.
Hope that helps, eh? You did a pretty damn good job. I don't think I could have shot faceless dudes on a derranged jet ski. ;P
Love and Luck,
Kat |
 Jupiter Green 5/13/07 . chapter 2Pretty spiffy so far.
I am always in for the long haul with a FFVII or a Yuffentine fic. Especially if it has gusto like this one. :D
Love and Luck,
Kat |
 SnowAngel 5/8/07 . chapter 42thanks for the update! please write more soon ) |
 Taokitty 5/8/07 . chapter 42O.O
*Fangirl Squeel* 0
I'm so happy you updated again, it was such a surprise seeing all the people I have on my list almost never update, and I'm so happy seeing your story moving again! 0
I'm so happy that you're so dedicated to it and it's so good, I hope you are content with the contents of the chapter! - |
 Sulphurya 5/6/07 . chapter 42Can I marry your Cid?
Oh, and you realise you 'will' break my heart if you go for anything other than Reno and Tifa?
(And, of course, Yuffie and Vincent.) |
 Casseh Valentine 5/2/07 . chapter 42Wow! You updated! *dies* Thank you SO much! *glomps* |
 Dragon Aurora 5/1/07 . chapter 42I am extremely happy you posted again. i was afraid you might not, but to my everlasting joy you have continued this wonderful story. PLEASE go on and write up the next chapter quick. I can't wait for Tifa to kick Montana up the a-hole.
Till next time,
dragon aurora |
 Artistic Suicide 5/1/07 . chapter 42I'm so glad to see a new chapter to this story! It was one of the first fanfictions that I'd ever read when I was a little younger and definitely the one that I'd most enjoyed. It's great to see that the story is still moving as interestingly as ever! |