Lovin' it!

It's so good! I love the love triangle. I've always had it bad for Reno... _

I've been reading as fast as you have been posting and i can't get enough, your use of detail and description is wonderful, and while it has been done many many times the Yuffie/Vincent relationship you have going is nothing short of amazing. This will be one of those fics that i will be sad to see come to an end, a wonderful job thus far I can't wait to read the rest of it. Bravo!

I love your fic! Can't wait for the next part. I put you on my author alert ! Ja ne!

What *I* wouldn't give to have Vinnie Valentino pressed up against *my* back... anyway, great fic! _

I love Vincent and Yuffie stories! Please write more! I'll be looking forward to your next post!

Ok, well, I love your story so far...I just hate you for putting Reno/Cloud/Tifa in there! leave Reno alone next time, he belongs with Elena, so there.

Great fic! Cloud and Tifa! Whoo-hoo! Write more; this is definitely awesome.

Wow. Vinnie Yuff-Puff, please? I love 'em together, but can't find any good stuff about 'em! Maybe this is what I've been looking for. Anyway, great work! This is fabulous.

This is exceptionally good for a fanfic (in case you haven't noticed, there's a lot of junk 'round here). I am admittedly impressed, and I hope you'll continue with this story ... and quickly! Of course, I love Vincent and Yuffie stories, so I might be somewhat biased.

Anyway, I have only one point of advice for you: your descriptions are beautifully done, but I noticed that sometimes they can get awkward. Examples: "...the sudden influx of thoughts that inundated her mind...". Don't misunderstand me - description is good. But sometimes more words than necessary are used ... brevity is the soul of wit, right?

Keep it up, though. You're an awesome writer from what I've seen so far.

Good start, I'm really looking forward to reading the rest