|Reviews for North of London|
| NSaddict 5/14/13 . chapter 13
Yes please post more ASAP. I missed your regular updates but I know school must come first. The pet adoption is a nice touch to reflect the expansion of the family John and Margarer are creating with each other. Write soon please! :)
| Guest 3/26/13 . chapter 11
Yes, please continue this story!
| JustMeKate 3/21/13 . chapter 10
I agree with Donna, don't make her wait for years: they have already had plenty of misunderstandings to keep them apart. So... John lives, Margaret lives, neither one of them is permanently injured, and they meet up again in less than a month. Great story by the way, I loved how you pictured John when he was drunk: I could totally see that ;) Your grasp of the characters is very good in my opinion.
| HR 3/18/13 . chapter 10
He lives and they meet again. Update Soon!
| Guest 3/7/13 . chapter 10
Save him u must!
| DonnaSangre 2/26/13 . chapter 10
Thanks for the chapter! It's worth waiting for))
If John's fate is in our hands, then - John ought to be all right! He can't just die and leave Margaret alone... And please, don't make her wait for him for years, please! They deserve happiness (I guess you agree with me here))). A bit of suffering and panicking would be fine, though)
| Guest 2/11/13 . chapter 1
who is william?...
| Aragorn's little Princess 2/10/13 . chapter 8
I rather like your story so far. And I must say, I screamed with laughter at the mental image of John Thornton drunk and slurring :D
| Velocitygirl1980 2/2/13 . chapter 7
Isn't this the same as chapter five? They were off on Honeymoon in the last chapter, and now we're back to the wedding night. :/
| Velocitygirl1980 2/2/13 . chapter 6
That old goat at the station was funny! hehe! Anyway, apologies for the delay in reviewing the latest chapter of this seriously sweet fic - I've been without internet these last few days. It was worth it, though, to come back to this! It's great now that Margaret and John are off on honeymoon, and your parting shot was intriguing. Shenanigans to come? Hmmm I guessing we've not seen the last of Roddy and Maude? Awesome update, and I hope to see another soon. Thanks!
| Velocitygirl1980 1/28/13 . chapter 5
It's lovely to see them settling into married life and finding their love for one another. They're a lovely couple, and you write them so well. Great update, and I hope to see another soon. Thanks!
| Velocitygirl1980 1/28/13 . chapter 4
Nicholas Higgins giving Margaret away at her wedding was such a lovely touch. I was sad at the beginning because both of Margaret's parents are deceased (no longer there to see her big day), but Higgins acting in the father's stead made up for it, and I think her father would be pleased at her choice. Lovely wedding, on the whole. But gah! They were just getting cosy with each other when the guests arrived! :( Well, I'm sure John will give Margaret a wedding night to remember, lol! ;) Another super chapter. Loved it!
| Velocitygirl1980 1/28/13 . chapter 3
Awww that was so thoughtful of John to decide on Spain as their honeymoon destination. I hope Margaret get's to see Frederick again, and meet her sister-in-law. Great to see them setting up home together, and Mrs Thornton is warming to Margaret, too. It all fits so nicely, and the writing is consistently great with a nice pace and flow. Excellent work!
| Velocitygirl1980 1/28/13 . chapter 2
Another great chapter! I love how you write Fanny - I can imagine her steam-rollering into the marriage plans and hi-jacking the whole event (I love her, one of my fave characters). I missed John in this chap, but I'm off to read chapter three - I'm keen to see what his gift for Margaret is. Loving this, so thanks again for posting.
| Velocitygirl1980 1/28/13 . chapter 1
So sweet. I really like your writing style and the way you describe each shifting scene. I've always been curious about what came next for Margaret and John Thornton, and I'll be following this fic to see where you take it. Thanks for sharing with us, and keep up the excellent work.