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princess ayeka
2002-09-30 . chapter 4
just a word of advice dont make tomoyo pregnent its not greatly liked. p.s.make Eiol try to take out and things like when they were kids even if its dumd and make Tomoyo not want to and he picks her up takes to were ever its yuor choose when they get back home Tomoyo is kind again but will not Eiol hug or kiss or even touch her so now he has to get her to trust him again you get the idea sorry if this was kind of long.
FinalYinYang
2002-08-09 . chapter 4
OOOOHHHHH

*frowns*

Why?! I hope your going to recontinue this fanfic... but as for now... GOOD LUCK on your Slayer fanfics!!
FinalYinYang
2002-08-08 . chapter 1
They are married aren't they?

I mean.... Tomoyo lossing her innocence to Eriol, her husband.........what is she mad about???!!! I really... kind of don't get that part.... they are married... and she quoted "still love eriol"....... so.... she's mad because.......

Not a clue from me......

well... good chappy!!!
raven
2002-08-08 . chapter 3
Please continue this really good story!!
mysterio000
2002-08-06 . chapter 2
hey! i hope to see a continuation!
AA-Chan
2002-08-06 . chapter 2
You have done it again, Fanny-Chan! A lovely fic once again... but it's soooooo sad in the beginning! I hope everything will turn out alright for Tomoyo. Question: What did he do??? Or are you going to explain that later in the story or is it just too... rated "R" type stuff? Oh well, BUT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! This story's got me thinking! until then, ja ne!
SAKURA Blossoms
2002-08-06 . chapter 2
no affence but is that the end of the story cause if it is that story was kinda confusing and i dont get why she had a halo above her head did she die? and if she did tell me why if you could email me that would be great! ^_^'

SAKURA Blossoms
Luna
2002-08-04 . chapter 1
Um...it's good but what's it the sequal too? ehehe I don't really know and it would be easier to understand if I did. Still I don't really see how Eriol of all people would have it in him to rape anyone! let alone tomoyo. well what's done is done.
Ja-ne!
Luna
Tears Of Darkness
2002-08-04 . chapter 1
o god...poor tomoyo i usually aren't interested in e+t fics but i can't say the same about this one
now i know why you are one of my favourite authors
Ying Fa
2002-08-04 . chapter 1
This story is so kawaii!!!!
applebiscuits
2002-08-03 . chapter 1
HI, JUST WANT TO SAY "KAWAII" FOR YOUR STORY...
I like it!!!! Hope you read my stories and review them too... I'll wait for your review...

bye.....
GOD BLESS TO YOU AND YOUR KAWAII STORY...
KyteAura
2002-08-03 . chapter 1
Um...Wow...Fanny-chan...That was VERY angtsy...Are you in a bad mood these days?
Anyways I can't wait until the story really starts.
mysterio000
2002-08-03 . chapter 1
wah.......that's so sad! hope to see a continuation!
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