Hm Interesting story. I liked the plot and it flowed well. Your descriptions were excellent. The only difficulty is that it doesn't fit well with the known history. The Mandalorians were gone long before the empire, Boba Fett, and Ben. That doesn't matter much to me, but just so you know!

Wow!! This is a great story it shouldve got like... a TON of reviews!!! Really interesting too!! I loved it!!! You're a great writer!!PLLLLEEEEAAAASSSEEEEEE continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

~Alexa~