This is such a good story, I'm sad it is short. ):

Ahhhh! it's just soo good! I wish you would write more to it!

the end was my favorite part

I know what else you cand add. In the last chapter Eddie says lets have an adventure. So Loren and Eddie can have adventures. Or have Tyler come to Eddie because he thinks he's not a good enough father or Chloe come to Loren.

You're welcome, you made Leddie strong and I love this story. Great job, my queen!

You're killin' me here.. Love it! Not as much as I love you!

This was so cute i love how u made and not have leddie .you should make another storie i love ur stories

HEY I LOVED THIS, THE WAY EDDIE N LOREN HUNG TO EACH OTHER, THERE LOVE SO STRONG NO MATTER WHAT, NOT EVEN THE POSSIBLITY OF SOPHIA BEING HIS WOULD SEPARATE THESE TWO, NOTHING COULD COME BETWEEN THEM.I LOVED IT...:)

I really liked when he realized it wasn't his baby,but was still ok because he knew he had loren and can always start a family. I really love the whole Damn story you are such a good writer.

Loved it! such a good job! i think the best part was how they found eachother I love when its not actually how they originally find eachother but a different way, anyways great job and i cant wait to read more stories from you!

Ahhhh thank god Sophia is not eddies but maybe you could go into Eddie and Loren's honeymoon or had them start a family or something idk! But this was really good I loved it!

Loved it

Awww this was absolutely amazing!the wedding and ending were perfect! :)

Agreed. CHOLE YOU WHORE.

Ha ha will the nextbe up soon