| Reviews for Grandmotherhood |
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skyguyalltheway 3/13/13 . chapter 1*sigh* if only this was what happened. Amazing story! I couldn't (and still can't) stop smiling :) |
Gywdionllyr 3/11/13 . chapter 1Loved It! I came across your story A Mother's Love in January and loved the whole story. I'm glad you wrote a sequel to it and hope you will include a Obi-Wan/Satine relationship. |
ODA 3/10/13 . chapter 1 Write a sequel. Ooh you know what you could do. Dooku breaks out but gets his legs chopped off and has Vaders procedure. DO NOT STOP WITH THIS STORY LINE! |
Angel of Darkness Forever 2/28/13 . chapter 1Aww. Loved the story and hope to see the Obi-Wan/Satine story soon. |
theFGnat 2/28/13 . chapter 1Nice and sweet. It really would be great if you wrote about Obi Wan and Satine. I'm more for Siri, but it is logical that you would go for Satine if you don't know Siri. As long as Obi gets to be happy,the poor guy has had enough suffering as it is. Still, I would laugh if he became a father despite what he told Shmi. The look on his face would be priceless. xD He reaaly would make a wonderful father -by all means, he already is. Keep up the great work, hope tohear from you soon! :) |
not paranoid enough 2/11/13 . chapter 1Only Shmi can keep those two in line. Anakin and Obi-Wan are incorrigible. :D |
thedarkpokemaster 1/31/13 . chapter 1awwwww so sweet and funny as well. |
Jedi Master Misty Sman-Esay 1/19/13 . chapter 1A wonderful piece! :) I can see Obi-Wan pacing no matter the circumstances. I have a feeling that Anakin will be repaid if you write a sequel for all of that. |
KageOkami-Kogo 1/19/13 . chapter 1Awww! So cute! I love that the Skywalker twins already have a bond with "Uncle Obi"! I would very much like to see a sequel to this! Perhaps you can take into account that Palpatine would have had more than one "apprentice" and use that as a conflict. The story might center around Anakin and Obi-wan dealing with older Luke and Leia, and maybe even Leia meeting Han sometime... who knows what you could do! Whatever you choose to do, though, I'm sure it'll be great! |
Guest 1/19/13 . chapter 1 I don't normally do reviews so bear with me. I rather enjoyed both a mothers love and its sequal and believe you should continou to expand this AU. |
topsilog00 1/18/13 . chapter 1I think you should write a sequel to a mothers love, to this vignette. Your style of writing is simply amazing and i would love to read more! Please please please? |
Jedi Angel001 1/17/13 . chapter 1That was a great chapter to a wonderful story. |
xSuperNovax 1/17/13 . chapter 1 I absolutely loved this!Amazing job! |
novelreader 1/17/13 . chapter 1 Siri is dead so you went the right way with Satine. Obi-Wan has a very open heart doesn't he, not Anakin though. I imagine he's the type of person that believes in soul mates and that Padme is the only person for him. I love the idea of Ahsoka training Leia, and of course Obi-Wan would train Luke. If you ever make a sequel I'm gonna be rather interested in the Luke/Leia sibling relationship. I don't remember the movies well though all I know about Luke and Leia's relationship is that Luke thought she was rather pretty and had sort of a crush on her, that and they kissed like three times in the whole trilogy, but other then that it was mostly Han and Leia and their relationship did not have any spark. I don't know why they kissed! See what happens when you turn to the dark side Anakin, your kids for some odd reason kisses a lot, your son has a crush on your daughter, your daughter uses your son to get this other guy, but other then that their not mutually attracted to each other. Then again it's partially Obi-Wan's fault for not telling then earlier. _ The books at least show the sibling relationship or at least hints at it, though I haven't read much star wars books with them in it. I'd be very interested in their relationship if you ever make a sequel, which better have plot and not soo fluffy! This was a really fluffy and sweet oneshot. It's so great that Shmi got to see her grankids here! |
FireShifter 1/17/13 . chapter 1I love it! Beautifully written through and through! I especially like the part where Luke choose Obi-Wan to be his mentor. |