Ah, this was a most delectable piece.

I nearly clamored for blood when we didn't get more of Jessamine Kaldwin in the game. For some reason I also was enamored with her the moment I saw her. I understand she has to die in the first minutes to make the proper dramatic impact the story aims to make, but little flashbacks, recordings, notes? There were some, but not enough.

In short, I love Jessamine stories, but don't take me wrong. I know there must be some bias to my opinion, however, this story is still very well executed.

Well done with tying it back to the canon. I liked it very much. Good work.

Bravo! I would love to see more of this.

Ah, but the wait was indeed worth it. Another enjoyable read and a worthy companion story to Spelunking.

Very nice, I think it's better then the last one, especially the ending.

I hope you continue with another chapter/story.