I like Kakashi. He's unlike Naruto, and that's what I like about him. I also like how you put kanji symbols in yor story. Forgive me if I may do that as well. Good work.

"Wait, one more question. Why Kakashi?"

Kyouna's lack of response coupled with Kakashi's strange feeling have me curious. Is there a connection, I wonder?

"Oh you'll see why."

A mysterious comment, eh? Curiouser and curiouser!

Yeah...
I know that...

Curious that Kyouna mentioned nothing about her engagement to Kakashi. Even more so that the seal was originally intended to make Kakashi, not Naruto, forget her.

Finally...

I love Naruto's child-logic in this one, Allein.

"We'll be fine."

It's a good sign that Kyouna's thinking in this direction. The fact that Kakashi was thinking about her faith in him along with the male role models in his life-this is also a positive mindset.

Thank you...
Kmu jg lanjutin terus y fic'a...
Coz ntar hbis slese ujian q mo bc lgi lo smpe happy ending..

Meskipun q g review tp critamu slalu q tunggu...
Minggu depan q da ujian praktek trus ujian sekolah, n terakhir ujian nasional
Doain sukses y...
Amiinn...

It says a lot about the attacker(s) that they waited until Kakashi was gone on a long-term mission. How cowardly of them to harm a woman and child! :O

They share a common pain-the loss of a father. It was heartwarming to hear Kakashi's offer for next year, and equally so to see Kyouna's reaction to it. No wonder Kushina is playing matchmaker!

Interesting to see what Kyouna's memories reveal-she seemed to be slowly falling for Kakashi, and vice-versa. Given that Kakashi, in the present, refers to her as his fiancee, watching the journey of this couple from the perspective of Kyouna's gradually returning memories is something to look forward to.

I smiled at Naruto's suspicious mind in this one, Allein. And as for your author's note, I look forward to what you have planned!

Hahaha...
Akhir'a ktemu kakashi fans d indo...