Amazing Chapter I loved it :)
I'm so sad that Autumn died :(
But I'm glad that Skye and Mako are still a team :)

This is amazing, you should get published for stuff like this. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

no i will miss autumn somuch but i'm glad she and marco are alive for the final i can see tethley's killing crystal then marc or skye killing tethley's or something, great chapter please update soon

nooooooooo please not marco or skye, really gripping chapter, now I'm gonna chack like everyhour to see if you've updated, hurry really good though

Loved this Chapter and your writing style :)
I'm glad autumn is still alive
And I Mako and Skye :)
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This is AMAZING! I too love it when people write about completely new characters, from districts not talked about so much. Especially District 9.

I think this was written very well; it gives you a good feel on what District 9 is like. And how Skye's family, most importantly, how Skye is.

Really good opening; I have such a hard time figuring out what to open with. Doing it with something the character loves is always a good thing.

I would love to read all of it at once, but I have lovely schoolwork to do. Keep up the good work, I would so read another story like this one!

Awesome Story can't wait for you to write more!

nooooooo autumn

that was a nice chapter, please update soon

yay autumn i'm guessing tethly's, if thats how you spell her name,will be in the final 2 or something, please makes skye be the one to kill her, great chapter update soon

Hey there :)

just read your story in one go, really captivating storytelling and you made me really FEEL the horror of the games. I am excited as to how it goes on, great job so far!

ah please update soon, maybe aututm uses the fire bomb or something, smart idea please update soon

i liked this chapter a lot, it was really good please update again soon

please update soon

whens the next one gonna be up?