Love the story and the chapters you've done so I'd like to apply. _

First Name: Denali

Middle Initial:E

Last Name: Starr

Age: 24

Hair:Brown, long, reached the middle of back

Eyes: Blue

Skin: White, slight tan (not much)

Race: White/Caucasian

Height:5' 11"

Weight: 140 lbs

Homeworld: Earth

Occupation(student/UNSC enlist/Spartan II or III/ODST/Insurrectionist/AI) : UNSC enlist

Rank(if applicable): Lieutenant

Specialization: Sniper & Swordsmen

Fighting style/ weapons: Long range sniper & and close quarters energy swordsmen/combat knife
Weapons of Choice: Sniper Rifle, Pistol, Combat Knifes, and Energy Swords

History(with family): American child from Earth, she lived a pretty nice life as a child. Never dreamed that one day she would join the UNSC. When she joined the UNSC at age 19 she enlisted as a computer technician and had never touched a gun before. However due to the Covenant's relentless assault she was forced onto the battlefield. At first she would simply hide and pray that she would live, but as her platoon began to fall apart during one battle she found an unknown courage within her and rallied them together. She received a medal for her bravery and continued on up the ladder to her current rank as Lieutenant.

She has a great respect for any and all Spartans. She feel into the typical stereotype that the Spartans were machines until she was saved by one, Master Chief. After that, she greatly respects them and expects her platoon/battalion to do the same.

Personality: She is very outgoing and compassionate, but she knows when it is time to laugh and time to work. On the battlefield she is focused on the objective at hand and will stop at nothing to accomplish it. She is a fearless leader and a brilliant tactician, however she does value learning about other cultures and societies (she has a special interest in Elites).
However, off the battlefield she is a loyal friend. Once she accepts someone as a friend she will stand by them til the bitter end. She is also a good listener.

Noble Member: Carter

Other: She has a headset that contains her radio. Similar to an Xbox headset with the headphone setup with a microphone on one side. Also, an eyepiece that can be extended on the right side to increase her zoom on her weapons.
Here is a picture of her: art/The-Glow-in-the-Dark-369792294?ga_submit_new10 %253A1367745816

LOL here ya are

First Name: Holly

Middle Initial: J.

Last Name: Maddison

Age: 27

Hair: blonde

Eyes: green

Skin: fair

Race: White

Height: 6 foot 11 inches

Weight: 231 lbs.

Homeworld: Unknown

Occupation(student/UNSC enlist/Spartan II or III/ODST/Insurrectionist/AI) : Spartan III

Rank(if applicable): Commander

Specialization: Infiltration, espionage, ambushes, firefights and other large-scale battles

Fighting style/ weapons: Martial Arts and bladed items. DMR, Assault Rifle, Magnum, Shotgun, Battle Rifle

History(with family): Had a loving family who met their end at the hands of a Zealot, which she tricked and killed following her sixth birthday.

Personality: Distant sometimes, generally compliant and kind, wryly cynical, angry on battlefield

Noble Member: 7

Other: None

Spartan Holly, female, somewhat sarcastic overall sweet, a little cynical sometimes. Also she (I) am normally kind and humorous and patient. Please gimme a chapter? Thank you!

First Name: Erika

Middle Initial: None

Last Name: D056

Age: 28

Hair: dark blond in a short pony tail parted to the right

Eyes: faded blue

Skin: fair with a few scars on her face, arms, and legs

Race: SPARTAN III

Height: 6 foot 5 inches

Weight: 350 without armor

Homeworld: Gilgamesh

Occupation(student/UNSC enlist/Spartan II or III/ODST/Insurrectionist/AI) : SPARTAN III

Rank(if applicable): I'm not sure what would be good if they have ranks... Sorry!

Specialization: tracker

Fighting style/ weapons: Assault rifle, plasma grenades

History(with family): Orphaned at a young age and soon enlisted with the Spartan III program. She can't remember much about her past before being enlisted as a Spartan III except for the fact that it was always lonely.

Personality: Good-natured, obedient, laid back, likes to laugh, has a good heart, brave, can joke around a little too much

Noble Member: Jorge

Other:

I can only post using my phone and it won't space things out. Can I still submit an OC?

Ermehgerd finally a new chapter, I thought I was gonna die of old age before it happened

Thanks for the chapter

Agh! I appreciate the kind words. . .This last chapter was a total pain in the butt to write!

I'm no expert, but your chapters are pretty well written and expressed, that's probably why no one is giving any constructive criticism yet; because you don't need any! Update soon please!

Jeez did I scare everybody off?! Or maybe it's the fact that I haven't updated in 12 years. . .Sorry guys! !

But hey, I'm updating Spartan Vacation soon, so STOP THROWING STUFF AT ME!

This is me, reviewing my own story. . .

Well the reviews for this are a mixture of OCs and something like a forum discussion. . .which I think is awesome!

What (I think) you guys are saying is that all those ranks ARE NAVY RANKS but they are also the only ranks that Spartans have achieved. I don't know much about ranking in the military and definitely not that much about the stuff in Halo (even though I'm thinking of enlisting. . .THAT'S BAD)

The next conversation you guys should have is how well I portray the characters, and what flaws I have as a writer.

Well now as I have cemented myself (probably) as some weird obsessive fan fiction author who talks to poeple through reviews, I say:

SAYONARA BAKA HENTAI (s)

To a reply to that guy who replied to me:

I never said it was not a navy rank, I stated it was also from the navy, if I didn't i apologise, but I meant it, only one spartan three from my understanding is a chief petty officer, (the one who trained the S-IV group.

Awesome idea I must say :P

You skipped chapter 4 XD.

First Name: Isaac

Middle Initial: A.

Last Name: Maxis

Age: 22

Hair: Jet black, slightly longer than regulation

Eyes: Gold

Skin: Pale (Because of armor)

Race: Caucasian

Homeworld: Harvest

Occupation: Spartan III

Rank: Lieutenant

Specialization: The Jack-of-all-trades

Fighting Style/ Weapons: Satisfied with anything that can kill, and that kills efficiently

History: Back before he went through the Spartan III program, Isaac witnessed the merciless slaughter of everyone and everything he held dear, and willingly became a Spartan, vowing to become the Covenant's Grim Reaper and kill every last one of them.

Personality: After the destruction of Harvest, something died inside Isaac, and erased almost all traces of compassion, mercy, and remorse from his mind. In and out of battle he shows little to no emotion, is unaffected by bravado, keeps rational and calm at all times, and carries out his orders with ruthless conviction and efficiency. Despite all of this, he still has a small piece of humanity inside him; One that is nearly impossible to uncover.

Noble Member: Kat or Noble 6

Other: His Spartan tag is A115