i really like where your going with this update soon

I like it,can't wait for the next chapter

I really like your story! I love how you show the characters as they are portrayed on the show! I cant wait for your next chapter! :)

Great chapter! This is a really good idea. I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm loving the subtle Dee/Mac interaction!

Your characterization of Dennis is excellent. It fits his scheming nature.

Good job! :)

i'm really enjoying this and can't wait to see where you're going with it. I found your writing style excellent and the characters were in character, which its difficult to do in the Sunny universe. Well done! Looking forward to reading :)