"It's too late for me, Thor," Loki said choking softly, when he could breathe again. "It was always too late for me."

Did you. Really just write that. It was wrong on so many levels it was almost right.

I mean... WOW. I've no words left! I was certainly not expecting THAT to happen... *sobs into shirt sleeve* GODS SUMMER

"Shh, Thor. Just…Just hold me." Did you. Did you mean for this to happen. Was my Loki sadness not enough for you, and you just HAD TO BRING ANOTHER GOD FORSAKEN FANDOM INTO THIS

*throws hands into the air* I'm done. Just done.

Man, this review still hasn't done this chapter justice, and I'm already out of ideas of how to profess my love. D: But it was so GOOD and I think I may have teared up a tiny bit maybe

But HECK YEAH I'll stay for a sequel! I'm so glad Loki's not gone! *prances around the room happily*

SIGYN? SIGYN IS COMING TOO? OH MY GOD YOU NEED TO WRITE THIS GO NOW

That was so good. Cranberries, that was so good.

Lexi

*throws hands up in the air* I'm done. Done with life. Too many feelings.

That was /really/ well done. So it wasn't Loki who really killed Odin after all? Urgh! Thor's never going to believe him! He's a lot of things, Thor, but one of them is not patient.

*screams and falls to the floor* You write angst so wonderfully... *sobs* too wonderfully... *sobs*

This is seriously one of my favorite Loki-based fanfictions I've ever read. It flows so nicely, the grammar's impeccable, and the way you write Loki leaves the reader half wanting to slap him and half wanting to kiss him. Urgh! What do I do with all these mixed emotions?!

*grasps at air* THE FEELINGS

Lexi

OH GOD WHY I CANNOT EVEN THINK OR SPEAK APSDLKFJALAKJDSFLKJ?!

(sorry too lazy to log in)

But WOW! The Allfather's DEAD? I was not expecting that, *clutches knees to chest and rocks back and forth* not expecting that, not expecting that...

I think you're righting Thor very well; I mean, I think that's how he'd probably act. And also, I like how you're righting it in Asgard again, with Valhalla and such. It's fun to visualize, like that. :)

Anyways, thanks for breaking my heart. I seriously can't wait to read what happens next.

Lexi

That chapter was amazing! I still don't know how you manage to put that much emotion into your words. D: Urgh. I'm done. *melts into the floor in a pile of emotion*

Seriously, though, that was amazing writing. So sad. My Loki feels are coming back to me.

I don't have sound right now, I'm on the computer with the broken speaker, but I will watch it later.

Until next time! :)

Lexi

ASDFGHJKL... CAN YOU NOT?! I MEAN REALLY. AS IF I WASN'T EMOTIONALLY TRAUMATIZED ENOUGH BY BBC, NOW I HAVE TO READ THIS BULLSHIT. I'MA GONNA SMACK YOU WHEN I GET HOME.

This story is so amazing. I wait with bated breath for the next chapter...

sorry just didn't get all of my feelings out

"Darkness was all he had."

AHHH WHAT IS THIS

... ... Yep. Definitely sorcery.

AHH! WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO OUR HEARTS! Yes, you did Loki and Thor's relationship just /perfectly/, leaving me having like fourty fangirl attacks... *slumps onto desk* I seriously don't know how you do it. But however you do (even if it's sorcery! I don't care!), KEEP DOING IT! :D My heart may say no, but... wow, girl, just fabulous writing.

Lexi

This is a great fic! I love Loki and Thor angst!

Odin should pretty much be crapping himself at this point. Speaking from the point of view of the Eddas, severing family ties is what allows (or rather drives) Loki to bring forth Ragnarok. In mythology it's letting go of his love for his children, which is what allowed the chains that held him forged from Vali and Narfi's entrails to keep him bound, that allowed Loki to really cut loose and become the End of All Things. Here, well emotional pain is a hell of a thing. Thor of all people truly giving up on him might just be the last straw. I wonder if the Norns will point that out to the Allfather sometime soon?

YEAAAAAAAAAH...NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPE.

HAVE BOARDED THE NOPE TRAIN TO FUCKTHATVILLE AND WILL DOUBTFUL BE RETURNING.

THOOOOOOOOOR BABY COME HERE LEMME HUG YOU AND LOKI YOU IDIOT AND ASLDKJFASLDF I AM SO FUCKING DONE WITH ALL THESE FEELS I CANNOT EVEN DEAL ANYMORE NO, JUST NO

Loved this chapter. ;_; Such a sad scene (and good dialogue). Please update again soon! :o)

ALL THESE FEELS! THEY ARE GOING TO BE THE END OF MEEEEE! *curls up on the floor and tries not to have a feels attack*

FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS HOLY

I'm fairly certain that's illegal in at least thirteen states. Seriously.

I mean, I thought Odin was a jerk before, but, MAN that clot pole needs a punch in the face. Calling him 'Laufeyson' in front of all of Asgard?! Wow, that was such a good line. That was so, so, good, girl.

I also thought it creative that Thanos made that remark to Loki that no, it's not going to be as easy just to join hel. And I never thought about it like that. I suppose dying, for him, is like walking into his daughter's arms.

Nope nope nope nope nope DONE

Urgh, wow, that whole Thanos dream was really well done. God, my heart not functioning properly after that one.

And then the last line? What was that? Are you TRYING to kill us?

I'll have you know that most humans cannot live without a heart. (Save for a select few fangirls who've mastered the art but that takes a lot of training you know)

"He cried like the lost child that he was." WHAT

... give me back my heart please.

This would be very much appreciated.

(Sorry it took me so long to read... I was a lying raccoon (sorry first noun that popped into my head) like twice. XD Fantastic writing, though. URGH.)

Truffy