This was very well writen and nice to read. you deserve more reveiws :) good job on the description in this peice, it was cool to see into a dream in this way, and the mystery in what Lyle said was very good. it had very good closure at the end as well. again good work, and thank you for writeing it.

Cherub

This was very sweet. I can easily imagine this happening.

This is nice sweet fic. It's also the only Classic Legion Lyle/Brainy story that I can find. I'd hate to seem pushy but is there anychance of a sequel?

Never conidered Querl as having a homosexual side after his fascination with Kara.

But I can accept it I suppose.

Gyah, I dont' feel like loggin in. I had to read it, it starred Brainiac 5, and it actually answered some questions I had about him. As always, I had the answers right. THANK GOD HE HAS A NICKNAME. Typing Brainiac 5 over and over again gets annoying, as does dOMITUPSYK. My nickname is Doma. -hugs Brainy- MINE! I had no idea his actual name was Querl Dox. I just might name m'own kid that.

"Beyond brilliant, but has occasionally been unfriendly, unemotional in the face of extreme circumstance, and/or insane. But he tries not to be."

Just makes me love him more. Wait, that last part sounds a lot like ME...

I happened across this story and was so impressed with your use of language and the subtle way you approached a slashy tie between Brainy and Invisible Kid. Very nice. Reminded me how I used to obsess about the Legion!

Marvelous! A bit sad, but not depressing. Love goes beyond everything, even death.

I must say, the more I consider the possibilities of Lyle and Brainy, the more I like it (and it's far healthier than the Oedipal Complex he's been assigned lately! -_-;;), so finding your fic was quite a treat! ::standing ovation::

Chemical King was from Phlon