Really a good read. I found the story to be a very different spin on the Ranma and Akane relationship than others I have read. I do wish that you would come back to this an finish, but it seems like that will not happen after the long break. Still it was a fun read.

I have read this fic before its not bad. I'm just wondering if it is discontinued or is going to update sometime.

FANTASTIC STORY! Really, this one is superbe! The ideas of a '"guy-cursed" Akane falls head over heals for Ranma-chan' are hardly original. BUT THIS! Where "Kaneda" was raised to be a guy, and then there's the "Chi-swap", where the two seem to be characatuers of their respective "cursed" genders! Brillinat and original!
But, there's a problemme. The grammar and spelling is absolutely atrocious! And then there's how poorly the pronouns are used, where there SHOULD be a 'he' there's a 'she' and vice verse, etc. etc. (of course Ranma fics to tend to have that problemme)
Well, aisde from the writing errors, I find it to be a highly detailed and well developed story. I liked Nabiki's scemeing to keep Ranma a girl, and how "Kaneda" seeming was smitten with Ranma-chan, whilst Ranma-chan fussed over it all.
Well, I give it a AA+. Do kinda wish the author had gotten to the party s/he had been building up to. Could've been interesting.
Author, Thanks. And you really 'ought to continue this, it's great reading these kind of larger entracing fics.

I don't know if you're still around but this chapter is messed up. You obviously copy and pasted from a previous ff.n posting as the old ff.n HTML is visible. And the chapter cuts off before the end.

great story so far but why havent you yupdated in over three years i hate getting so deep into a fanfic only to see it was/isnt complete. All and all i an enjoying the way things have happend so far, i must admit i am also enjoying the fact Ranma is finally acting like a proper lady

Great looking story so far, but I wish you'd continue it. I want to see how it ends.

Oh, and in conclusion to my comment in the early chapters, it doesn't alter the story, but it would throw off a lot of perceptions to correct your misinterpretation of Jusenkyo's effect on hair color.

I don't like your "Juusenkyo Blow to the Soul", but I like it better than some of the poor attempts at writing I've read when authors are stuck in their ideas.

Did you ever read D.B. Sommer's Shampoo 1/2? It has a similar problem for Ranma and Shampoo-kun. (they're stuck going to school with alternate names and in their cursed forms because of some foul-ups during their first week)

Interesting plot considering that I have yet to see anyone else who has tried this concept. However, I noticed several very annoying shortcomings:

"The 179 cm/5'10", 69 kg/153# teenager had long loose hair like
his father. But HIS was red."
Ignoring the typo (# instead of lb.), Nyannichuan grants the person a view of their female genetic equivalent. The fact that Nodoka probably had red hair as a teenager is rare enough. Throw in the fact that Ranma's female form didn't have red hair in the manga, and the chance of Kaneda having red hair are off the bottom of the chart. (I assume it isn't a big plot point, so you might just be able to change it and forget about it. I'll let you know for sure when I finish reading)

Kaneda spoke up, "Yeah, Nabiki! Leave Ranma alone! You
want her to think you're a **."
I'd suggest substituting "lesbian" for "**". It gives the writing more class. (substituing "gay" if Nabiki were male would be equivalent. Using "**" makes Kaneda (and by extension, you as the writer) sound too much like the average homophobic punk)

Also, I haven't confirmed it, but apparently it's a little-known fact that Kaneda is the kind of given name that would be best paired with "My parents were drunk at the time" or something similar. Since this is so unknown and Kaneda is such a perfectly similar name, I don't see any problem using it, I just think you might want to research it in the future.

I have enjoyed this

Your stories are great, I don't understand lack of reviews.

this is a good one but you need to have ranma(in girl form)raped and a dick forced up her ** and **, and you need to have her scream and moan

I was enjoying this story quite a bit, it seemed to show alot more insight and writing skill than an average fanfic. Sure it had numerous errors and bad formattng but overall it was ahead of the rest. Unfortunately I was quite upset to find that you stopped writing in the middle of it, that has to be one of my biggest pet peeves when it comes to people on this site. You gave us an interesting story for twenty something chapters and then you just stopped with no warning, shame on you.

long, but good :)

Hi.

Just thought I'd let you know that chapter 23 is missing for some reason. Keep up the good work, this story is pretty interesting.