Honestly this is the first time I've written a review in all my years of being on fanfiction, but I felt that I just had to leave something after reading all of the chapters you have up so far. I have to say Bravo on your part for keeping to the characters personalities and some elements of the original story while making it your own. Saito must be especially difficult to write at times since much of his signs of affection are very subtle. At any rate, I'm hoping to read more and am looking forward to how this marriage, and story, will unfold. _

I miss you and Please Update Soon *o*

Mqybe...Saito was there for the death, and ended their misery and happened to be there when she saw. Am I right? Haha.

The premise of this fic is very interesting. However, your lack of editing and poor grammar are so prevalent and distracting, I can't really enjoy it as much as I'd like to. I got this far hoping to see Kazama, but was disappointed by how you portrayed him.

OMG!I THOUGHT I HAD REVIEWED THIS CHAPTER BUT I REALIZED THAT I DIDN'T!I AM SORRY!
Yay for the update!
This chapter was pretty interesting I liked how you put Kazama in there somehow it made all the situation turn out a bit more interesting also the thing with the rasetsu was a good idea.
Though Saito so angry,seemed kind of strange I wonder how did those two actually meet each other.
I hope to see the next update soon. :)

Another great chapter. It's worth the wait *for 3 weeks* and yeah I won't kill you HAHAHA... Actually I didn't get the time to see if you have updated your latest chap for the past 2 weeks because I did some school work. I was really worried that you have already updated tons *exaggerating much* of chaps at that time but when I visit your story, there were no updates yet T_T and I feel happy _*sorry for those readers who waited so much* that you haven't updated during those weeks because yeah I wasn't available. heheheheh

Wow, I was really surprised *like unexpectedly* when you said it was a great coincidence. I was really bored that day and HOPING *with high spirit* you'll update another marvelous chapter *which I really ANTICIPATED*. Was it merely coincidence? HAHAHAHAH

Okay so much of my blabbering which make this whole review an essay, I'll go back to your storyweeeee!
OH GOSH, OH GOSH, OH GOSSHH! Finally, Kazama appeared!. I like it when he does his smirk but don't think of me going to Kazama's side I'm still FAITHFUL and LOYAL to Saito *hoped he read this but that would be impossible :(*.Oh, it was really sweet for Chizuru to HUG Saito *really wish I was her*. I was really intrigued about Chikage when he said to Saito about this thing called reunion. I'm just craving for more. This story really improves every time. OOOhhh how I much love reading your stories.

I'll expect more from you and your soon successful chapters... SORRY FOR SUCH A LOOOOOONG REVIEW! Gomene.

As always I'll Keep encouraging you along with the other readers of your stories but for now all I could say is Please Update Soon. _

lol she fell asleep, he's supposed to fall asleep not you Chizuru lol ooo omg that was soooo ahhh and gosh i wanna know how they know eachother! keep up the awesome work;D

Good for Chizuru, she wouldn't let go of him after he woke from that 'nightmare'. She is right; she is his wife and it is her right and duty to calm him, regardless of what he thinks. When he protected her from the intruder, it was more than just duty that was motivating him, even though I'm sure he would refuse to admit it. Long chapters are great. Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the next installment!

So, Saito has a dark past hehe. It's intriguing. Chizuru is as sweet and caring as always that makes Saito fall into a stupor, XD It was a nice scene in the bed, where she tried to soothe him after that nightmare.

The story development is interesting and we can't wait to know more! *_* And finally! It's Kazama appearance in the whole 6 chapters XDDD And it seems that Saito and Kazama have met in the past *rub their chins* we love the scene where Saito came to rescue Chizuru! It was so cool! But Kazama seemed to notice that she is untouched by her husband XDDD But we guess that all of captains of Shinsengumi (including Saito himself) are too dense to notice that Chikage knows the truth. So...Hajime-san, you better hurry to produce heirs XDDD

It was a pleasant and long awaited reading! We loved everything in this chapter! Please, update soon! We hope that the next update won't take so long _ Ganbatte and good luck, honey!

-gasp- NEW CHAAPPTERRR! And Saito protects Chizuru from Kazaamaa! 33 -squeals and daydreams like a fangirl- (oh wait, I am one...) Please update soon!

Omg omg omg it's sooooo good! Love it! I really want to know what happens! I hope u can update asap, please? And good luck with your midterms! Gambatte! Take care!

Please Update soon...

Thanks for the update. Nice to see that the two of them are making a little bit of progress in the relationship department. Looking forward to what comes next!

From a depressed chapter to a blissful one.
You really turned the tables, expected from you as a great writer.

When reading this chapter. I can't stop from smiling. It's just too much...*smiling like my heart's gonna burst* Happiness. Oh, how do you do it?
Chizuru's misfortune for a day really paid off. Being catched by Saito, treated for a food by Saito and showing his smile to her.
Wish I could be her. I hope this lovey-dovey thing will continue... *make morrrreee!*
Can't wait for the next I'm already at high spirit..

Please update soon... Your high spirited, fangirl of the pairing, smiling like an idiot reviewee. Love lots.

I'll be waiting... Hihi :)

Hey-hey Thank for the update! It was one lovely chapter where we witness the first steps of developing romantic affairs! *_* Even Saito wasn't a stone-like man hahah. It was a very good chapter and it was so nice to read it after all the angsty things you made poor Chizuru go through in the previous chappie *you cruel girl, hahah*

te end of teh chapter was so touching...awww...we really hope that the love will bloom and they will find a way to grow it carefully like a flower. Their family life is so intiguing! It started not so well, but we are waiting for the happiness for those two in the end. YET! We still are waiting for Chika's return BWAHAHAHAHA! It can't be that he is forgotten, ne? But aside from Chika, we believe that Saito and Chizuru will trully fall in love with each other and care for each other and spend lots of wonderful and unforgetable days and NIGHTS together _
Thumbs up for you, honey! Please, update sooooooon