This is a very good story! I want them to fall for each other ahah xD

Very good! please finish! :)

Hey, I am liking your fic! I hope you continue and say what Kotetsu's new power is. Fun.

This chapter is amazing!

For some reason Kotetsu as a kid doing bthat. Being just playing and suddenly being scared, then using his powers unexpectedly.

Also being bullied by his freaked out family as well as other kids.

Summer is soon and hooefully you can have some more freedom to work on this and also have a well deserved break..

Keep up the great work! :)

Oh man you don't know how happy i am that you are continuing this! This concept is too promising to forget about, and i look forward to reading much much more!

Thanks for the chappie. Can't wait for the next one.

Thanks for the chappie

I really like this story. The idea of giving Kotetsu Jake's power is pretty cool and the fact that he would suppress it isn't surprising. Though I wonder if his Mom knows. She seems pretty smart lol. Guess we'll find out. I see many ways that this story could go and I look forward to seeing which direction you take.

please update the story, i loved reading these two chapters

Please do the,next part this story has a lot of the potential keep writing we love your work.

Excellent 2nd,half ...advise ...obtain a beta reader ...it will help in the editing ...after figuring what you were trying to relate ..i finally understood the theme

AWESOME JOB! ZAYN, you write better than me.

Thank you for this first chapter. This is very interesting

Hopefully there's more to come ...?

Hey. Look, I think you have a really good story idea going on here, but I think you could profit very much from a beta-reader, or a co-writer. I'd be intrested, if you want one, as this story intriques me. Why don't you drop me a life if you're intrested?