I like ur writing :-)

I'm serious when I say write the next chapter before I am consumed with what I call ntkwhn

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Ok first of all, I'd like to tell you that I love your idea. Although, there are mistakes in your story. Mostly it's "im" no new paragraphs for dialogue, and capitalization. Also please add more details in "Saving Nny". I suggest you put you're ideas on a graphic organizer and It'll be perfect. Don't delete the story because I want to know what happens. Thanks!