u should sooo make a sequel

wow, incredibly sad

Duuuuuude...D:

Words kinda fail me right now...I'm so sad!

Well, wow :O.

WOW! That was awesome! Mikey always seems to be losing his arm. Anyway, wow, that was just really amazing and I could see it all happening. I knew something was wrong when Donny couldn't feel his legs, but I honestly thought Mikey was in more trouble. So sad. It's ironic how Donny was trying to prevent Mikey from meeting his fate by getting him to talk about violets, but how it's going to help him meet his (if that makes sense). Anyway, it was a really good story.

did he die? NO! don't let donny die!... good story though.

Oh my God! It's so sad and so beautifully written!

you know, although this story was written back in the year 20 it ties up with the TMNT episode SainW "Same As It Never Was", it's scary! *shudders, whimpers then runs to curl in the corner* Mike losing an arm and Don dissappereing, the likness is- disturbing...

but that doesn't change the fact that this story is rock-on awsome! the fact that Don was blind and didn't know it was- well, sad, and yet the ending gives the 'incomplete' feel, an open ending, ya know? still, wonderful! I like it!

No...Don can't die! *cries* So sad...but still a good story...please, tell me Don makes it. Please?

Awesome story. I love the memory and how you did the dialogue. I could tell who was talking and everything. I know this stuff is old but never know if you get these reviews or not so here's my review that i enjoyed this story and stuff :)

Joce: *Wails.* Mikey! Don!

Mikey and Don: Um... *Sweatdrop.*

Joce: ; ; continue soon, ja ne...

-Joce, Mikey and Don

No! That was so sad. Man poor Don...I mean he's not my favorite but I still love him and Mikey too...*sniff*

Damn. This was one of the very first TMNT fics I read back in late 2002 when I found the now inactive TMNT Fanfic Archive site. It made me cry then, I shed buckets, it was one of the first times I ever literally cried out loud while reading a fanfic. Now I re-read it for the first time some two years later and it has exactly the same effect on me.

An incredible story, AJ. You have an awesome talent, this is one of my all time very favourite TMNT fics. It's so sad and bittersweet, I love it. Well done!

OMG WAH! DONNY! *wails and cuddles him* Damnit you made me cry. *shakes fist* Good work! AMAZING! *sniffs* Donny, my poor Donny... love this fic. It will be in my favourites.

This is without a doubt one of the most wonderful, complete, chilling and all around spectactular writings I've ever read. And to think...I found on under Ninja Turtles.