Ok thats not fair...you made me cry!Yes CRY!I never cry in storys!but bi love it!

This has got to be the sadest fic iv ever read!It made me cry!

Okay, it was a good story...

NO!

Y DID U KILL MARIA & VERITY?!

OMG, U R SOO CRUEL!

(but it WOZ a gud story, lol)

x Queen Of Slayers x

omg!
Jared's dead?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

Why so sad?

aw man she died.

Other than moments where it's hard to follow the conversation (I find it hard to tell who's saying what), this is a damn awesome start to a story. Yeah, I'm in awe. Loving the humour and the characters. You're wonderful!

Cheers.

♥ dash

First off I have to grudgingly admit that this story is amazing and that you deserve more reviews. I hated you for killing off so many of the beloved characters because every time one of them died I went off and started crying, bawling, and blubbering like an idiot (and the family members around me probably thought i had become insane considering they had no idea what the hell i was doing on the computer.)But i can't hate someone so brilliant because their deaths were beautifully done. Not in a way that most authors aim for, you know, making the audience all-sad and cry or whatever, the crap that people usually roll their eyes to. But no, you made their deaths symbolic and beautiful and that made it hurt so much more that i wept. Oddly enough I’m very glad i read this fic and no normally i don't cry with sad sappy endings ( i was rolling around laughing when Jack died in the Titanic, although i did think the overall movie was pretty stupid and dull, sorry I’m ranting now aren't i?) . All in all i think you’re a genius. I’m going to go check your bio now to see if you wrote any more L.J fics, hopefully a little happier since I don’t think my swollen eyes can take any more tears.And yes you should DEFINETLY write an epilog.

definatly do epilogue. it was a brilliant story and it took away a week from me, but it was definatly worth it. please do another! soon!

this story has been very good so far and i have enjoyed it very much. i hope chapter 20 is as good as the rest of them

you evil, evil person.

this is my favorite chapter so far-sad and beautiful.

I have spent the better part of 3 days and lost a great deal of sleep over this story and I must say, I don't regret it at all. This has been an absolutely amazing story and I positively love it. Your uniqueness as a writer is inspiring.

I regret the fact that Adrian and Verity would never become true soulmates. I regret the fact that Adrian would never see Verity again, even if she does revive as an Old Soul. I normally would go on about the injusticeness of it and tell you that they should reunite but in the middle of my rant, I decided to backspace it all and say, it was perfect. The ending. Albeit a sad ending, but not surprising because your story is a sad one. Definite kuddos to you. I will go on and read ur other works.

Why'd you have to do that to Amaro? He was so well, likable... But you can't just do that, can you? I beg of you, please let there be an epilouge.