|Reviews for True Hero|
| Melkor44 1/21/13 . chapter 1
Great start! I'd love to see where you take this, since your hands aren't tied much by canon...
I will say that you may want to work on longer chapters, something that all of us have/had to work on at some point... (going by word count, two thousand is a common stopping point, but feel free to write longer than that. For refrence, two thousand words in MS Word is usually close to seven pages. given that this has nearly 1300, that means you're actually a lot closer than you might think.) But that's just my opinion as someone who wants to be an author.
Regardless of my advice, I really do want to see this story grow-keep it up!
| Lunara the Ara 1/20/13 . chapter 1
Very nice start! I can't wait to see where this is going to go!