This is really really good. Funny, with a different turn of events in plot from other stories, as well as a new sort of layout. Hope you write another chapter!

This was wonderful! Your characterization of them was great; they were just adorable! :) I think I liked Tuesday and Wednesday the best.

All that in one week lol good story! :) make more please! ;) it was really cute :) love it!

That was so awesome. I really liked the one day down, the rest of my life to go approach. And I love Zack and London. They were so in-character. Please write more stories!

Great story! I totally loved it ! You should do more!