A beautiful and moving story. Absolutely beautifully written. :)

amazing well written story. sad but beautiful.

YOU MADE ME CRY ON MY KEYBOARD! So sad - I always wondered how they would have told Sal and Chloe... now I know!

you made me cry! this is so sad but so lovely!

Wow! Fantastic and tear-inducing. I loved the inclusion of the baby and Chloe fitted really well with the image I have of her in my mind.

Poor Sal. Going from having great news to tell Chris during their anniversary dinner to having to explain his death to their daughter would be one hell of a reality check.

I thought it was a nice touch that both Chloe and Sally got to tell him that they loved him during his last call and I loved Chloe's artwork.

The proposal and the flashbacks were great and really added to the emotional weight of the story.