Nice work! Again, sorry it took so long to review. You are doing a very good job with Jo's personality and the speech of the time. Awesome job!

Ahh, loving it!

I am really glad that you have not abandoned this story and don't plan to :-) . I like how Jo is realizing her true feelings in the story and acknowledges them. I am so curious how she is going to tell Laurie. How many more chapters do you think you will have?

Thanks for updating and I hope the next update will be sooner rather than later:-) !

whoa!thank god you updated this story..i am a fan..please continue this.. :)

I certainly hope you haven't abandoned this story!

Very cool two chapters MidnightSnowSapphire.

I can hardly wait for your next chapter . Please don't let us wait too long. I love this story line.

Love this story line. I hope those two find each other, if Jo doesn't stand it's way.

Hey!

Sorry it took me so long to get you this review, I seem to have lost this alert among a flood of e-mails. Very nice chapter I like that you have some development character-wise going on. This chapter also seemed a bit rushed, but otherwise great work!

MSA

I agree with Allesandria that Jo seems to be falling in love a bit too fast...but that being said, I'm so glad you updated...I continue to really enjoy the first person perspective, which surprises me :) Please continue soon, I am looking forward to seeing what happens next!

I really love this fic! I hope you continue and update as soon as you can! You have a new follower :)

this story is really good..:)) please continue..

You totally made my day with your update. I was so excited to read it and was not disappointed. One thing that struck me, though, is that Jo seemed to admit more quickly to feeling romantic feelings, versus a more protracted and in denial process. This is just my opinion, however. I thought it wonderful as is; and am looking forward to the next update:-).

Sounds great. Very realistic . Once I come to this part of the story I close the book or change the tv channel. I hope you can have an happy ending for these too. Even if it takes many chapters to get there. Your a great writer ! Keep up the good work!

I think you write Jo better than Alcott, that cruel woman, ever could. I just finished reading Little Women and your fic, along with others on this website, is just a brilliant way to overcome the disappointment )