The last sentence is hilarious! I can't wait for more :)

Hmmm family time.. amusement/water park! The whole gang could go or something! Paintballing, lazer tag or the beach.

Well, first of all chapter 20 was a fantastic follow up to 19. The plots and story lines collaborated perfectly and I thought the drama to fun ratio was great. Some of the only things I would like to see would be some more of Jake and Casey emotion. The way you showed that in chapter 20 was perfect. Also, as a suggestion, I would like to see Dawson on the fun family activity in chapter 21; maybe a picnic with her cooking skills and the four end up in the pouring rain. Maybe even a beach getaway. I think that there had definitely been some Gaby-Grace bonding so I would like to see some Gaby-Jake and more importantly, Gaby-Casey. I think that your sense of reality in the story is really apparent an that as a reader is something I look for. Also, your grammar is very good. Nothing unpleasant stood out to me spelling, punctuation, grammar, or storyline wise so this is one of my most followed stories. I am just really looking forward to seeing some Casey and Dawson time with the twins. This in my mind would be something "going right" for them. An "aha" moment for Casey as well. I think Gaby would really make them a family.

Thanks for sharing,

Rez.

I love this story! I am always sad when the chapter ends because that means I have to wait for the next one! You are such a good writer and I love this story soo much! Please keep writing! I especially love it when Casey comforts Grace and Jake. Please Keep Writing! )

Can't wait for more great chapter

I think something bad should happen to grace and I know that sounds terrible but I think it'll make things go somewhere else because no offense everything is great and I love the story but there isn't any drama that'll stick out so I think grace should get taped by someone on a different basketball team when on a tournament or age should get badly beat up by some cheerleader and make her go through a Heaney depression nd have jake and her become more closer

Gah, lol the missing teeth, I can't stand him. Anyway, I love the chap! It'll be good if kids can give their afterthoughts about Matt's adventure after season finale. :) Love the chap! :D

Wow, this was such a well written chapter :) I ver much enjoyed it. I would love a Dawsey centered chapter and maybe Jake and Grace meeting Antonio's twins Carla and Freddie, that would be interesting.

That was an emotional two episodes but they were good. Loved the chapter. Update soon.

Good story.

I want Casey and Dawson together.

Thank you.

I like this story! I get why Grace is as needy as she is and it's not a bad thing at all. She is such a sweet person and Jake is a good guy as well. But I totally ship Dawsey! Those two are so good for one another, ). But yea I still don't think the writers needed to kill Hallie off, that was sort of harsh. But oh well,lol

Note to self: dont read a/n when you havent seen the last 1.5 episodes! Lol holy crap... good chapters the whole miising graces competition thing was interesting and the in depth look at her feeling about it was really well written. Got to hear a little more about her past which was pretty cool. Update soon

So I liked this chapter but it was also sad because I know what's going to happen. I like that you're sticking to the story. Maybe Dawson could help out with Grace and Jake too.

Great chapter!

Okay I just want to say that I don't want you to kill off Hallie! I mean I know that the writer's did but you don't have to. anyway I really liked this chapter and I thought that all of the dares were really funny. Update soon.